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Engelsk rettelse pleace
19. august 2004 af
Louise1985 (Slettet)
Hejsa...
Jef ville lige høre, om der var nogle, der gad rette mit engelske resume igennem. Man overser tit nogle fejl, når man selv har lavet det :O) Ville blive RIGTIG glad, hvis nogle gad...
På forhånd tak.
Summary:
The short story is about how a huge church in Conn is divided into to parts. On the left side, a few the sinners are sitting while the right side is filled with other people every Sunday. There are electric wall-heaters to heat the right half of the church. The town is collecting money to missionary activities. The Father O’Rourke, who is the nephew of the church’s builder, decides that they should spend some of the money on a medical mission in Africa. A nun, by the name Philomena O’Halloran, is chosen. The citizens of Conn like the idea and a new fond is made, the Philomena fond.
Philomena kept writing letters to the town and they kept collecting money for the mission. After twenty years in Africa, Philomena wrote that she would send a young man from the mission in Africa. But it did not go as they had expected. The man looked like Philomena which really upset the town. It turned out that he was her son and everybody disliked it. The right side of the church stopped collecting immediately but the left side did not.
Jef ville lige høre, om der var nogle, der gad rette mit engelske resume igennem. Man overser tit nogle fejl, når man selv har lavet det :O) Ville blive RIGTIG glad, hvis nogle gad...
På forhånd tak.
Summary:
The short story is about how a huge church in Conn is divided into to parts. On the left side, a few the sinners are sitting while the right side is filled with other people every Sunday. There are electric wall-heaters to heat the right half of the church. The town is collecting money to missionary activities. The Father O’Rourke, who is the nephew of the church’s builder, decides that they should spend some of the money on a medical mission in Africa. A nun, by the name Philomena O’Halloran, is chosen. The citizens of Conn like the idea and a new fond is made, the Philomena fond.
Philomena kept writing letters to the town and they kept collecting money for the mission. After twenty years in Africa, Philomena wrote that she would send a young man from the mission in Africa. But it did not go as they had expected. The man looked like Philomena which really upset the town. It turned out that he was her son and everybody disliked it. The right side of the church stopped collecting immediately but the left side did not.
Svar #1
19. august 2004 af Smizze (Slettet)
Du mangler et "w" i "to".
Og så skal det vidst være "a few OF the sinners".
/Anne
Og så skal det vidst være "a few OF the sinners".
/Anne
Svar #2
19. august 2004 af Peden (Slettet)
1) Lad være med at skriv hjælp og please i titellinien, for mange af de andre her på forumet virker det helt usynligtgørende på dit indlæg.
2) Please staves med s og ikke med c ;)
3)
by the name -> by the name of, eller bare a nun named.
fond -> fund
2) Please staves med s og ikke med c ;)
3)
by the name -> by the name of, eller bare a nun named.
fond -> fund
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