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Engelsk rettelse
Summary:
The short story is about how a huge church in Conn is divided into two parts. On the left side, a few sinners are sitting while the right side is filled with other people every Sunday. There are electric wall-heaters to heat the right half of the church. The town is collecting money to missionary activities. The Father O’Rourke, who is the nephew of the church’s builder, decides that they should spend some of the money on a medical mission in Africa. A nun named Philomena O’Halloran is chosen. The citizens of Conn like the idea and a new fond is made, the Philomena fund.
Philomena kept writing letters to the town and they kept collecting money for the mission. After twenty years in Africa, Philomena wrote that she would send a young man from the mission in Africa. But it did not go as they had expected. The man looked like Philomena which really upset the town. It turned out that he was her son and everybody disliked it. The right side of the church stopped collecting immediately but the left side did not.
Svar #1
19. august 2004 af Lurch (Slettet)
Tråden skal nok komme øverst på listen alligevel:)
JEg ville nok bruge "the church's founder"
Det hedder fund og ikke fond. Fond betyder noget ligende "kærlig", holde af"
Svar #2
19. august 2004 af emul0c
Svar #3
19. august 2004 af Louise1985 (Slettet)
==>Emul0c. Jo jeg kan godt se at the skal fjernes...
Svar #4
19. august 2004 af Louise1985 (Slettet)
Svar #5
19. august 2004 af Louise1985 (Slettet)
Svar #6
19. august 2004 af emul0c
Steffen, som bor i Danmark, var på ferie i Spanien.
Så jeg tror at der skal komma.
Svar #7
19. august 2004 af Fingersen (Slettet)
Parentetiske: indeholder oplysninger som kunne have været foruden.
Bestemmende: Det modsatte
Håber det hjælper
MVH
Fingersen
Svar #8
20. august 2004 af Louise1985 (Slettet)
Kan i se nogle flere fejl/forbedriner i teksten?
Svar #9
22. august 2004 af Louise1985 (Slettet)
Nu er mine/jeres rettelser nedskrevet. Ville høre om der var flere fejl? eller forbedringer. Gider nogle tjekke min tegnsætning?
The short story is about how a huge church in Conn is divided into two parts. On the left side, a few sinners are sitting while the right side is filled with other people every Sunday. There are electric wall-heaters to heat the right half of the church. The town is collecting money to missionary activities. Father O’Rourke, who is the Church’s founder, decides that they should spend some of the money on a medical mission in Africa. A nun named Philomena O’Halloran is chosen. The citizens of Conn like the idea and a new fund is made, the Philomena fund.
Philomena kept writing letters to the town and they kept collecting money for the mission. After twenty years in Africa, Philomena wrote that she would send a young man from the mission in Africa. But it did not go as they had expected. The man looked like Philomena which really upset the town. It turned out that he was her son and everybody disliked it. The right side of the church stopped collecting immediately but the left side did not.
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