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10. februar 2008 af sara_b1988 (Slettet)
jeg har lige skrevet engelsk oversættelse. hvsi der er nogen der gider rette lidt i den, så må i meget gerne hjælpe. i behøver ikke rette den hel.

1. She has probably, since we saw her last, bought a new and better car
2. When we were on holiday in Germany last year, the car broke together.
3. If I for some reason comes too late, you must not become nervous.
4. The son promised solemnly that he, when he had won the princess and the half kingdom, Would write a postcard.
5. When the sister 40 years later returned home, were the brother dead.
6. The journalist often travelled to Spain.
he sultry afternoon arrived last year to madid's airport with the plane from Copenhagen, he however really became surprised at the heat.
7. The truck driver said that he farther by the road had seen something that actually had resembled a lion.
8. He unwillingly had to admit that 2 years earlier he had been in prison.
9. They say that the butcher is often more expensive than the supermarket, but the investigation shows actually that it seldom the case.
10. The boys listened attentively, while the gang-leader eagerly gave his orders.
11. The witness would only reluctantly report what she had seen at the night.
12. The neighbour had often said that he'd never borrow me his electric lawn mower. He thought clearly that I quickly will destroy it.
13. She knew that among the visitors there was a murderer, but who?


A sad sight

Unfortunately I must again bring a bad piece of news. During the rebellion in this country our embassy has been attacked. Nobody has seriously come to harm, but all the furniture has been broken. The money has been stolen, and there are no information about where they have disappeared off, but we hope for that in dm again. Within the last two days there has come a number of human beings for the embassy in order to ask for political asylum.
But we have only been able to give them two good advice:
either to relate oneself quietly or try to get out of the country. It was however a stroke of luck that we just got winds of the attack. That meant that we could take our measures, and therefore our current business hasn't been interrupted. The present situation must be described as unstable, but we get stays a fair amount of information from unofficial springs.
We'll analyse them and take them in a later report, but temporarily they indicate that there are advances in the government's negotiations with the rebels.


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Svar #1
10. februar 2008 af Mariique (Slettet)

2. Man kan ikke sige 'broke together', skriv i stedet 'broke down'. Pas på med bare at slå to ord op hver for sig og så sætte dem sammen, det bliver tit fordansket.

3. Igen fordansket. Jeg ville skrive: 'If I am late for som reason, you must not be nervous' eller endnu bedre 'Don't be nervous if I am late for some reason'. I er første person ental, der skal altså ikke være 's' på verbet

4. Byt om på promised og solemnly

5. When the sister returned home 40 years later , the brother was dead. Brother er tredje person ental, deraf 'was' - her skal der i øvrigt 's' på verbet, hvis der var et :)

Tænk over 6'eren og 7'eren igen og slå de ord op du ikke kender.

9. They say that the butcher is often more expensive than the supermarket, but the investigation actually shows that it is seldom the case.

11. Står der 'om natten'? Da tror jeg at du skal bruge 'in' i stedet for 'at'. Hvis der står 'den nat', slet 'at the' og skriv 'that'.

12. Lad være med at trække 'he' og 'would' sammen. Kig på tiden i 2. sætning og tænk over hvor 'clearly' og 'quickly' skal være. Hvad lyder godt i dine ører?

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Svar #2
10. februar 2008 af Mariique (Slettet)

A sad sight:
Pas på med at fordanske; man kan ikke sige 'come to harm', 'disappered off'.

'but we hope for that in dm again'??

'Advice' er utælleligt, og det hedder derfor 'a piece of advice'. Det gør det dog ikke med 'news'. Du ved når du hører det, at folk normalt bare siger 'bad news' om dårlige nyheder.

Alt i alt, så pas på med at tage de ord og vendinger fra ordbogen du ikke helt selv forstår, for jeg synes, jeg kan se det. Ellers fint.

Svar #3
10. februar 2008 af sara_b1988 (Slettet)

okay tusind tak:D

Svar #4
10. februar 2008 af sara_b1988 (Slettet)

jeg har kigget på nummer 12, den med clearly og quickly. The neighbour had often said that he'd never borrow me his electric lawn mower. He clearly thought that I will quickly destroy it.

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