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20. marts 2008 af
Mars1989 (Slettet)
heej . Er der ik nogen der vil rette den? så er I mega søde :D
London er en interessant by at besøge. Men den er mere end det. det er også en gammel by, der som Dickens siger-er blevet malet af tiden og har alle historiens farver.
et af det ældste steder i London, hvor folk har købt og solgt i århundrerde er Billingsgate fiskemarked. Der er ikke tvivl om, at i mere end tusind år er folk kommet til dette sted for at købe fisk, enten til sig selv eller til andre, som køber af dem.
MIT BUD:
London is an interessant town to visit. However, this more than that. This is also an old town, like Dickens said- it had been painted of time and has all history colours.
One of the oldest places in London, where people had bargain and seller for centuries, is Billingsagate fish market. There is no doubt about, that more then thousand years are people come to this place for buying fish, either to one self or to the others.
London er en interessant by at besøge. Men den er mere end det. det er også en gammel by, der som Dickens siger-er blevet malet af tiden og har alle historiens farver.
et af det ældste steder i London, hvor folk har købt og solgt i århundrerde er Billingsgate fiskemarked. Der er ikke tvivl om, at i mere end tusind år er folk kommet til dette sted for at købe fisk, enten til sig selv eller til andre, som køber af dem.
MIT BUD:
London is an interessant town to visit. However, this more than that. This is also an old town, like Dickens said- it had been painted of time and has all history colours.
One of the oldest places in London, where people had bargain and seller for centuries, is Billingsagate fish market. There is no doubt about, that more then thousand years are people come to this place for buying fish, either to one self or to the others.
Svar #1
20. marts 2008 af TanteOda (Slettet)
- London is an interessant town to visit.
1) interesting
- However, this more than that.
1) ", it is more..." ville være et pænere bud
- like Dickens said-
1) Hvad laver stregen umiddelbart efter said?
- it had been painted of time and has all history colours.
1) "of time" er en forkert oversættelse
2) Læg mærke til, at du bruger had og has i samme sætning
3) all colours of the history
- where people had bargain and seller for centuries
1) "bargain" er forkert oversat i forhold til denne sætning
2) "seller" bør være "sold"
3) Din kommasætning er flot i denne forbindelse.
4) Men husk lige at få bynavnet skrevet korrekt
- There is no doubt about,
1) slet ordet "about" helt
- that more then thousand years are people come to this place for buying fish,
1) "then" er forkert
2) "are people come" er forkert oversat
3) "for buying fish," to buy fish
- either to one self or to the others.
1) for oneself
2) slet "the" helt og aldeles
TanteOda
1) interesting
- However, this more than that.
1) ", it is more..." ville være et pænere bud
- like Dickens said-
1) Hvad laver stregen umiddelbart efter said?
- it had been painted of time and has all history colours.
1) "of time" er en forkert oversættelse
2) Læg mærke til, at du bruger had og has i samme sætning
3) all colours of the history
- where people had bargain and seller for centuries
1) "bargain" er forkert oversat i forhold til denne sætning
2) "seller" bør være "sold"
3) Din kommasætning er flot i denne forbindelse.
4) Men husk lige at få bynavnet skrevet korrekt
- There is no doubt about,
1) slet ordet "about" helt
- that more then thousand years are people come to this place for buying fish,
1) "then" er forkert
2) "are people come" er forkert oversat
3) "for buying fish," to buy fish
- either to one self or to the others.
1) for oneself
2) slet "the" helt og aldeles
TanteOda
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