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er sætningerne rigtige ?hjælp

03. april 2008 af BGXD (Slettet)
Hej, jeg har lige skrevet engelsk stil, men der er nogle sætninger som lyder forkerte i mine ører, vil i ikke lige se om de er korrekte tak.

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and God has decided to put them in hell
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Since we began walking to school, all people began looking at us.
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If you do not tolerate the bad sides in your life, then you do not deserve living
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As my four bodyguards were looking at my wound in my forehead, could I hear some whispering and some others laughing
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Everyone turn to me. ( alle vendte sig mod mig)
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My tears came out without a noise from my mouth
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So that must be why my hand has a weird pain, I said to my self
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The situation in front of the school is driving like a movie in front of my eye.
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but I am not going to calm me down.

mange tak i forvejen

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Svar #1
03. april 2008 af -Zeta- (Slettet)

Mine bud:

2.
all people began looking -> all people have begun looking
3.
in your life -> of your life
living -> to live
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in my forehead -> on my forehead
could I hear -> I heard
5.
everyone -> everybody
turn to -> turned towards
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my self -> myself
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calm me down -> calm down

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Svar #2
03. april 2008 af Kawina (Slettet)

1. "Put" ville jeg ikke bruge. Er der ikke andre ord for anbringe? prøv evt at slå henstille op.
3. , you doesn't deserve... udelad then.
4. I could istedet.
5. Everyone turned at me.
6. My tears ran down my cheeks without...
7. That must be the reason why my hand...
8. ? Det er ikke helt korrekt, men har ikke umiddelbart et bud.
9.I had no intend to calm down.

Har forsøgt at hjælpe så godt jeg kunne:-)
-Karina

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