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12sætninger, men måske mange fejl -HELP ME
Er der ikke en der har lyst til at rette for stavefejl, grammatisk eller andre fejl.Opgaven skal afleveres imorgen og jeg har akut brug for jeres HJÆLP.!
My life began at 8:55am at (Rigshospitalet) on Marts the 22th 1987. My name is Camilla, and I’m 21 years old. Born and raised in Denmark. I am the eldest sister and I have responsibility to take care of my other 3 siblings. My dad is bus driver and my mom is a housewife. I went to private school in Frederiksberg. My childhood was fantastic and I grown up with a good and educated family.
My siblings needs constantly help with their homework, so I basically work with them and point them in the right direction and stand back and let them do the harder work of digging up the answers. I am willing to help people and guide them to the right way.
Politics became a real passion of mine from an early age, and I am now member of Venstre. I have been involved in many subjects, and I like to discuss with people. My political skills are good and I work hard to learn more about all aspects in the political system. I am also a small shareholder, so I am doing a small business at home. I own many shares in different kind of companies e.g. Carlsberg, Danske Bank and Copenhagen Airport. I learned about shares when I was at college.
Tak - Camilla
Svar #1
31. august 2008 af Beki (Slettet)
My life began at 8:55am at (Rigshospitalet) on Marts the 22th 1987.
( synes ikke om sætningen- ville hellere omformulere den, dansk direkte oversat er ikke godt)
My name is Camilla and I’m 21 years old. I am born and raised in Denmark. I am the eldest of four children and I have the responsibility of taking care of my other 3 siblings. My dad is a busdriver and my mom is a housewife. I went to private school in Frederiksberg. My childhood was fantastic and I grew up with a good and educated family.
My siblings constantly need help with their homework, so I basically work with them and point them in the right direction and stand back and let them do the harder work of digging up the answers. I am willing to help people and guide them on the right way. ( igen meget dansk ordstilling)
From an early age politics became my passio , and I am now member of the party "Venstre". I have been involved in many subjects, and I like to discuss with people. My political skills are good and I work hard to learn more about all aspects in the political system. I am also a small shareholder, so I am doing a small business at home. ( doing - kan man ikke sige? ) I own many shares in different kind of companies e.g. Carlsberg, Danske Bank and Copenhagen Airport. I learned about shares when I was at college.
Svar #2
31. august 2008 af Beki (Slettet)
Der er stadigvæk MANGE ting som skal rettes!!
But you should consider another party than "venstre" maybe the socialdemokraterne ;) hehe
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