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Dansk:

Prisen for en multikultur
I USA har det multikulturelle samfund ført til konflikter. Vil det også ske i Danmark?

Multikultur betyder ikke blandings- eller hybridkultur, hvor mange kulturer har bidraget til en fælles kultur, hvor det er vanskeligt at udskille de enkelte kulturelle gruppers andel i hybrid- eller smeltedigelkulturen […]
Ved et multikulturelt samfund forstås, at enkelte kulturelle grupper klart kan udskilles i et samfund, og evt. at de kulturelle grupper organiserer sig og stiller krav […]

I mange år troede amerikanerne optimistisk, at alle indvandrergrupper hurtigst ville blive assimileret ind i amerikanskheden. Det er delvis rigtigt, at mange immigranter hurtigt blev amerikanere, og at de fleste ønskede det. Tilvandringen af mange øst- og sydøsteuropæere fra slutningen af 1800-tallet fik imidlertid nogle til at vakle i troen på den gnidningsløse assimilation. De urolige indførte en ”I Am an American Day”! Tvungen assimilering er hæslig, men naturlig assimilation er hovedreglen i USA og kan måles i antallet af giftermål hen over etniske grænser. I undersøgelser svarer to femtedele af amerikanerne, at de har forskellige etniske rødder.
 

Engelsk:

The price for a multi-culture
In the United States the multi-cultural society has resulted in conflicts. Will it occur in Denmark as well?

Multi-culture is not equal to mixed or hybrid culture where many cultures have contributed to a common culture in which it is difficult to extract the individual parts of the cultural groups in the hybrid- or melting-pot cultures […]
A multi-cultural society is defined by individual cultural groups that evidently are able to be extracted in a society and that the cultural groups possibly organize and make demands […]

For many years the Americans optimistically believed that all groups of immigrants would be assimilated into the “Americanism” as soon as possible. It is partially correct that lots of immigrants quickly became Americans and that the greater part wanted to. The immigration of many Eastern- and South-eastern Europeans from the ending of the 1800s, however, made some people falter in their belief in the smooth assimilation. The concerned ones implemented an “I Am an American Day”! Forced assimilation is horrible, but natural assimilation is the main rule in the United States and it is possible to measure in the number of matrimonies across ethnic origins. In the examination two fifths of the Americans answer that they have various ethnic origins.