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Hjælp, rettelse af engelsk referat!.
hej alle :)
Jeg har skulle skrive et referat af teksten "The Ants" og nu den så færdig.. Men vil godt ha den rettet for eventuelle fejl, tror ikk det er så forfærdelig mange, men det ku jo være, referatet her skal afleveres imorgen, så håber virkelige nogle dejlgie personer gider kigge på min tekst og rette den.. :)
- Hvis i sys at der nogle steder godt ku være en bedre formulering siger i det os bare, ;)
Referat:
This story is about a little family consisting of 4 people; a grandfather, a father, a mother and their son Tim. They live near a sea in Veranda. Tim is a little lonely boy, he always plays with the ants. Jane, his mother, is not a happy woman, she wants to get custody of the child and get divorced from her husband, Stewart. Stewart is a hard working man; he is very busy and does not see Jane and Tim so much. Jane does not love him no more and decides to get separated from him.
When Stewart comes home Jane wants to talk with him about her decision so they go for a walk along the sea and let Tim be with Arthur.
Tim is still playing with the ants and talking with Arthur. Arthur already knows that Jane like to get a divorced from Stewart so he ask Tim indirectly about whom he would like to live with if there was a choice between mother and Father.
Tim does not give him a proper reason and ignore him while playing with the ants.
Later at the evening Jane and Stewart come back at home.
They have decided to move from each other by getting a divorce. Jane wants Tim with her because she is the mother. Tim likes to live by himself, but he is not in that age.
Svar #1
05. november 2008 af messiiiiiii (Slettet)
Undskyld ** har rettet lidt på stilen og skrevet få sætninger mere; HER ER REFERATET:
This story is about a little family consisting of 4 people; a grandfather, a father, a mother and their son Tim. They live near a sea in Veranda. Tim is a little lonely boy, he always plays with the ants. Jane, his mother, is not a happy woman, she wants to get custody of the child and get divorced from her husband, Stewart. Stewart is a hard working man; he is very busy and does not see Jane and Tim so much. Jane does not love him no more and have decided to get separated from him.
When Stewart comes home Jane wants to talk with him about her decision so they go for a walk along the sea and let Tim be with Arthur.
Tim is still playing with the ants and talking with Arthur. Arthur already knows that Jane like to get a divorced from Stewart so he ask Tim indirectly about whom he would like to live with if there was a choice between mother and father.
Tim does not give him a proper reason and ignore him while playing with the ants.
Later in the evening Jane and Stewart come back at home.
They have decided to move from each other by getting a divorce. Jane wants Tim to live with her because she is the mother. Tim likes to live by himself, but he is not in that age.
Jane and Stewart are in a terrible discussion and Jane begins to cry on the way. She says that Stewart has left her and Tim alone.
Tim also begins to cry. Stewart becomes angry and takes the car and run away. Jane crying, while Tim becomes so angry that he finally burns the ants.
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