Engelsk rettelse

Nogen der vil hjælpe mig med mit engelsk og kigge det igennem?

skal beskrive stillejet i nedenstående tekst - men kan ikke finde ud af hvad det præcist er jeg skal gøre?

So, I go ,"WHAT about Lindsay?" and hes like, "What" and I go, "Dude, you are like totally lying," and hes like, " I didnt do anything, " and I go, "Thats it, dude. We are like OVER, like TOTALLY." And he goes, like "What are you talking about?" So im like, dude, forget it. Like totally.

Og har skrevet et par sætninger - så hvis vil kigge dem igennem for fejl ville det være en kæmpe hjælp :)

He was a where that the task was difficult

The soldiers arent treaded as mature people when they return

Being looked a pun as ahero can be quite demanding

Another thing which would make the situation woth is the fact that those tougngsters are a thread to society

There has never been many of them

I go to school which roof is red

The dogs barked

She is visiting her brother every day
 

Hvad er det modsatte af loyal?