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HASTER!!! rettelse af tekst inden imorgen.
Hej, jeg vil gerne ha en eller flere til at kigge på min tekst og se om der er nogle fejl, og husk det haster!!
på forhånd tak.
This story is about a little family that consists of 4 people; a grandfather, a father, a mother and their son, Tim. They live near a sea in Veranda. Tim is a little lonely boy; he always plays with the ants. Jane, his mother, is not a happy woman, she wants to get the custody of Tim and get divorced from her husband, Stewart. Stewart does not see Jane and Tim so much; Jane has no feelings for him anymore. She does not love him and has decided to get a divorce. Jane is waiting for Stewart comes home.
When Stewart comes home Jane wants to talk with him about her decision so they go for a walk down the sea and let Tim be with Arthur.
Tim is playing with the ants and talking with Arthur. Arthur already knows that Jane like to get a divorce from Stewart so he asks Tim about whom he would like to live with if there was a choice between his mother and father.
Tim does not answer and ignore him while he is playing with the ants.
Later in the evening Jane and Stewart come back at home.
They have both decided to move from each other by getting a divorce. Jane wants Tim to live with her because she think the mother has more rights than the father.
Jane and Stewart are in a terrible discussion about who has the right of Tim. Jane begins to cry on the way and she says that Stewart has left her and Tim alone.
Tim also begins to cry. Stewart becomes angry and takes the car and run away. Jane is still crying while Tim becomes so angry that he burns the ants.
All in all Jane wants a divorce and the custody of Tim.
Svar #1
08. november 2008 af MaryBaryTary (Slettet)
I første afsnit, sidste sætning: "Jane is waiting for Stewart comes home", skal du nok skrive: "Jane is waiting for Stewart to come home."
"Arthur already knows that Jane like to get a divorce from Stewart" , skriv: "Arthur already knows, that Jane would like to get a divorce from Stewart."
"Tim does not answer and ignore him while he is playing with the ants." her skal du lige rette "ignore" til "ignores", da det er 3. person ental..
"Later in the evening Jane and Stewart come back at home." skriv: "Later that evening Jane and Stewart came back home"
"They have both decided to move from each other by getting a divorce. Jane wants Tim to live with her because she think the mother has more rights than the father." skriv: "They had both decided to move away from each other by getting a divorce. Jane wants Tim to live with her because she thinks the mother has more rights than the father"
"about who has the right of Tim".. "right to tim"
"becomes angry" her ville det være mere korrekt at skrive "gets angry"
.. (:
Svar #2
08. november 2008 af messiiiiiii (Slettet)
hehe jo tak, for rettelsen men nu det jo så for sent :/ ..
Svar #4
08. november 2008 af messiiiiiii (Slettet)
hehe men det gør ik noget, man lærer jo stadig noget af det (:
Svar #5
08. november 2008 af MaryBaryTary (Slettet)
Haah ja, håber du fik rettet det alligevel! fra nu af kigger jeg lige på datoerne først..
Svar #6
08. november 2008 af messiiiiiii (Slettet)
jeg har måske rettet noget af det, læste den os igennem på skolen inden jeg printede ud, så håber jeg da os :) .. men er da glad for der ikk er yderligere fejl, men fejl som nutids-r hader så, men der var kun en af dem, heldigvis! xD
Svar #9
08. november 2008 af messiiiiiii (Slettet)
hm ja, det har du ret i, men håber da jeg får en go karakterer for referatet her ;D
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