rettelse af engelsk til i morgen

glemte lige at skrive at det haster lidt og det gør ikke noget hvis i ikke er overdrevet gode til enegelsk. det handler bare om nogle små sætninger jeg er lidt usikker på.

Du kunne fx indsætte det her? ellers er det jo lidt svært at rette det.... Sæt du det ind her... så ska du nok få hjælp.

jamen fylder det ikke for meget at sætte ind her? tænke om jeg ikke kunne sende det over mail?

nej, bar smid det herind. Folk er her for at hjælpe..

okay. jeg har bare sat de sætninger ind jeg har været mest i tvivl om.

Atticus doesn’t think it is okay for them making funny caricatures of their neighbour, perhaps because the snowman really looks like Mr. Avery which might not make Mr. Avery more excited about it.


Previously in the story Jem and Scout found in the tree-trunk two scrubbed and polished pennies – called “Indian-heads”. These two things seem to have some kind of connection and as I think it was Boo Radley who had placed the things in the tree-trunk; it has to be him who put the blanket on Scout.


We are told that she had a shadow of her old grin crossed her face when they tell her that they are awful sorry.


she tells Jem and Scout: “Always wanted a smaller house”, now she have more room for her azaleas, and when they ask her if she aren’t grieving she answers: “Grieving, child? Why, I hated that old cow barn.


Harper Lee use theses contrast the night were Atticus wakes up Scout and Jem. Here we are told it is freezing cold, but as a contrast they look at the fire which is extremely warm.

Atticus doesn’t think it is okay for them TO BE making funny caricatures of their neighbour, perhaps because the snowman really looks like Mr. Avery which might not make Mr. Avery(jeg ville skrive HIM i stedet for at sige MR AVERY en gang til) more excited about it.


Previously in the story Jem and Scout found two scrubbed and polished pennies IN THE TREE-TRUNK – called “Indian-heads”. These two things seem to have some kind of connection and (udelad AS) I think it was Boo Radley who had placed the things in the tree-trunk; it HAD to be him who put the blanket OVER Scout.


We are told that she had a shadow of her old grin ACROSS her face when they tell her that they are AWFULLY sorry.


she tells Jem and Scout: “Always wanted a smaller house”, now she HAS more room for her azaleas, and when they ask her if she ISN'T grieving she answers: “Grieving, child? Why, I hated that old cow barn.


Harper Lee use THESE contrastS the night were Atticus wakes up Scout and Jem. Here we are told it is freezing cold, but as a contrast they look at the fire which is extremely warm

Kun nogle enkelte fejl som f.eks kongruens.... mine rettelser er skrevet med stort..

Er du ved at læse bogen? Jeg læste den i gymnasiet, og det er stadigvæk en af mine ynglingsbøger;O)

Jeg ville bare lige sige, at jeg synes, det r for sejt, at folk gider sidde og rette, hjælpe hinanden.. SÅdan ska det være.. ville ønske jeg kunne hjælpe nogle..