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UHHH .... den var lidt sværere ... forstår ikke helt hvor du vil hen med det du har skrevet - skal den holdes i 'you' eller 'we'???... men vil prøve :

Can we not remain childs?
Why do we grow? We start having our mother and father by our side, and believe that we are invulnerable. But as the years passes by, we become different from our parents. One day when we look to both our sides, we can not see them. We are left alone. Why we are growing so if we are the days we are adults not his mother or his father by his side - fatter ærlig talt ikke hvad du mener??? - fx 'While we are growing we do not have our mother or father by our side'??
Why is it so great to be an adult? Let me say what great: NOTHING. There is Nothing good in being an adult. The more you grow the more we get seperated from our parents. You get more problems. And you are not invincible anymore.
Maybe you have seen in it - ?? tried it?? We believe we can cope with everything ourselves.

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Hvilken stavekontrol har du dog brugt!!!??

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Har du den danske tekst?? - det ville være lidt lettere at rette fra den!

M.

Du skal i hvert fald lade være med at bruge danske bogstaver. Det er fy fy at bruge Æ Ø og Å. Du skrev årrgh

Hvis du skal have det udtryk hedder det Arrgh.

Her parents paid their debt. du har skrevet at forældrene har betalt deres egen gæld. Skriv i stedet Her parents paid her debt.

Du skrev også Louise held them. Du har garanteret slået 'holdt af' op i en ordbog. men når du ser på opslagene i en ordbog skal du huske at læse alle forslagene, Louise cared deeply for them . eller  Louise loved them very much.

På min hjemmeside har jeg forslag til hvordan man kan lære dansk nemt og sjovt. Jeg skriver at man skal se DVD film. Hvis du i stedet ser engelsksprogede DVD film får du en bedre fornemmelse af faste fraser og ordspil på engelsk.

Jeg håber det kan være en lille hjælp. God fornøjelse med skriveriet. PS man er ikke dumsen når der er noget man ikke ved, så længe man er smart nok til at spørge andre om hjælp bliver man hurtigt meget bedre.

Med venlig hilsen Lea Thume www.thume.dk

yepss har den danske...

Kan man ikke bare forblive barn?
Hvorfor vokser vi? Man starter med at have sin mor og far ved sin side, og tror at man er usårlig. Men som årene går falder man mere og mere fra dem. En dag når man kigger til begge sider er der ingen at se.
Man er forladt alene. Hvorfor vokser vi så hvis vi den dag vi er voksen ikke har sin mor eller sin far ved sin side. Hvad er der så godt i at blive voksen?
Lad mig sige hvad der er. INTET. Der intet godt i at blive voksen. Jo mere man vokser jo mere går man fra sine forældre. Man får flere problemer. Og det går langsom op for en at man faktisk ikke er usårlig længere.

Måske har i oplevet det. Man tror man kan klare alt selv. Man går ud i den store verden. Med rank ryg fordi man tror nu at man er voksen og kan klare alt og alle. Men bare en lille smule blæst kan til intet gøre én. Man bryder sammen og ønsker dem ved sin side. Men de er for længst gået væk. Man søger dem overalt men kan ikke finde dem. Og beder på at bliver et barn igen. For da man var barn havde man sine forældre ved sin side.

Hør mit barn. Du er den du er takket være dine forældre. Aldrig tro at du er blevet voksen og kan klare dig uden dem. For det kan du ikke. Selvom du er 20, 30, 40…. 60 år.
Lige meget hvor gammel du er, får du altid brug for dem. De vil altid støtte dig. Du skal bare huske på at selvom du vokser op og bliver til et modent menneske er du stadig deres lille barn, og at de altid vil være ved din side.

Lad mig fortælle dig om lille Louise.
Louise var en glad lille pige. Hun boede sammen med sin mor og far. Hun sov hver aften i deres seng.
Hun holdte rigtig meget af dem. Og de elskede hende også rigtig meget. Som årerne gik voksede Louise. Hun blev til en ung køn pige. Da hun var blevet omkring 19 år. Satte hun sig ned sammen med sine forældre.
,, Jeg flytter sammen med Lars” sagde Lousie.
,, Jammen søde Louise, det går da ikke. Du har ikke engang en uddannelse hvordan vil du forsørge dig” sagde hendes mor med en stille stemme.
,, årgghh mor hvad er det dog du tænker på jeg har rigelige penge, og han har også. Vi skal nok klare os” sagde Louise og gik ind på sit værelse.
En uge efter var alt klar. Hun skulle flytte sammen med Lars. De havde det meget godt de første par måneder. De havde lidt svært ved at betale huslejen men de lånte penge fra deres venner og fik samlet det beløb de skulle betale. En dag da Louise stod op var Lars ikke ved hendes side. Han havde skrevet et brev til hende hvor i der stod at han var smuttet og at hun måtte passe sig selv fra nu af. Louise blev lammet. Hun vidste ikke hvad hun skulle gøre. Hun havde ingen penge til at betale huslejen eller de penge de skyldte deres venner. Hun ringede straks til sin mor. Hendes mor kom og trøstede hende.
Hendes forældre betalte deres gæld og hun flyttede hjem til dem igen.
 

Vil forsøge ... undskyld hvis jeg laver lidt fejl ;)

Can you just remain a child?

Why do we grow? You stars having your mother and father by your side, and believes you are invulnerable. But as the years go, you get more and more diffrent from them. One day, when you look to both your sides, there are none to see.

You are left alone. Why do we grow, if the day we turn adult / become an adult / grow up, we do not have our mother or our father by our side? What is then great about beeing an adult?

Let me explain it this way: Nothing. There are nothing great about growing up / becoming an adult. The more you grow the more you differ from your parents. You get mere problems. And slowly you realize that you are actually not invulnerable any more.

Maybe you have expericed it. You think you can take care of everything yourself. (ikke sikker på 'Man går ud i den store verden - You walk into the big world. Med rank ryg fordi man tror nu at man er voksen og kan klare alt og alle'). But only a little wind can destroy you. You collapse and want them by your side. But they are gone a long time ago. You seek them everywere, but can not find them. And pray to become a child again. Because when you were a child you had your parents by your side.

Listen my child. You are who you are because of your parents. Never think you have become a grow up / an adult and can do without them. Because you can not. Even when you are 20, 30, 40 ... 60 yers.

Nomatter how old you are, you will always need them. They will suport you. You have to remember that even though you grow up, and become a modern human, you still will be their little child, and they will always be by your side.

Lead my tell you about little Louise.

Louise was a happy little girl. She lived thogeter with her mother and father. She slept every evening in their bed. She really loved them. And they loved her so much. As the years went by Louise grew. She became a beautiful young girl. When she was about 19 years she sat down with her parents.

"I have moved thogether with Lars" Louise said.

"But sweet Louise, it does not work .You do not even have an education, how are you going to provide yourself?" her mother said with a small voice.

"Arhh mom, what is it you are thinking about, I have plenty of money, and he has to. We are going to be fine" Louise said and went to her room.

A week later everything was ready. She was going to move thogether with Lars. They were having a great time the first couple of months. They had a little difficulty paying the rent, but they leant money from their friends and got assembled the amount they had to pay. One day Louise when awoke, Lars was not by her side. He had written her a letter in which it said that she had to take care of herself from now on and that he had leaved.  Louise got paralyzed. She did not knew what to do. She had no money to pay the rent or those money she owed to their friends. Immediately she called her mother. Her mother came and comfort her. Her parents paied their debt and she moved back home again.

M.

Jeg har lagt mærke til i begge skriver 'What is it you are thinking about?'
Ville man ikke sige 'What are you thinking of?' What is it er lidt danglish, som i The Julekalender :)

Can we not remain children?

Why do we grow? We start out having our mother and father by our side, and believe that we are invulnerable. But as the years pass we drift further from our parents. Eventually we wake up one day expecting to have them around and they are not there. We are left alone. Why must we go on without our parents by our side?

What's so good about being an adult? Here’s what’s good- NOTHING. Nothing good about being an adult. The more we grow the further apart we become from our parents. We acquire more problems. We’re no longer invincible.

Perhaps we’ve experienced this before. We believe we can cope with everything on our own. Man goes out into the big world. The rank of adulthood makes us feel like we can handle any issue. But The smallest things can turn us into nothing.
We break down and want them to protect us. But they are long gone. We look for them everywhere –our parents- but they’re no where to be found. We wish to be children again as they can help and protect us.
Always remember to thank your parents. You might think of yourself as an adult, but you will always be a child in need of your parents. Whether you’re 20,30,40 or 60 you will always have the instinct to turn to your parents in times of need.
Let me tell you about little Louise.
Louise was a happy little girl. She lived with her mother and father. She slept every night in their bed. She was very attached to them. And they loved her so much.
Then one day little Louise became a young woman. She wanted to move from her parents’ home.
”I’m moving in with Lars”, said Lousie.
”Louise, this isn’t you. You do not even have an education… ”how will you make ends meet”, said her mother in a quiet voice.
”Årgghh mother… what are you thinking??? I have plenty of money and so does Lars. We will take care of ourselves”, said Louise. She went to her room.

After one week she was all set to move in with Lars. They had it good for the first few months. They had some difficulty paying the rent but they borrowed money from friends to cover it.
One day when Louise got up Lars was not there. He’d written her a letter that he had to slip away and she had to be on her own. Louise was paralyzed. She had no idea of what to do. She had no money to pay the rent and nothing to pay her freinds back. She immediately phoned her mother. Her mother came and comforted her. Her parents paid her debt and she moved back home again.

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I hope this helped, but I question the truth in all instances of child-parent attachment. Some parents set their kids on fire or drown them in tubs. Of course there are healthy relationships between parents and children, but there are also damaging ones. To rely on the law that parents should always be loved and appreciated simply because they are parents can be a bit misleading.

Good luck!

Ups! - det har du vist ret i!!! - ja - bare en smule fordansket ;) Lavede den vist også lidt med venstre hånd - som hjælp altså !

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