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In an interview With Men’s Fitness, American singer Brooke Hogan describes her work as singer.
Brooke Hogan says that her mother raised her on that 80s style on the Isley Bros, which she founds(*Finds) very interesting and seems to like (fjern "it") a lot.
Brooke tells in the interview that she gets a lot of criticism by many people who don’t understand she (*is tror jeg du mener i stedet for can)can doing R&B because they are not accustomed to seeing a white girl doing R&B. Many people are accustomed to seeing black girls / boys (performing R&B* i stedet for "deal with R&B)deal with R&B.
But Brooke does not seem to address that criticism because this is what she was raised on, and she seems to be indifferent to others’ opinion about it.
MF (*asks)makes her a question about, if she could work with every body in the world, whom (*byt om på she og would)she would ideally want to work with?. It does not look /as if/ Hogan was in doubt for a second whom her dream partner is. It became quite clear that she wants to work with Stevie Wonder who /is/ /a/ black American songwriter/-s/, singer, pianist and mouthorgan plays. He is very skilful and he has been a great inspiration for many musicians. Brooke Hogan is a big fan of Stevie and look/s/ up to him she hope/s/ to produce something in collaboration with him. Brooke says that she met him one time and she was unable to so much /as to speak (?)/, so she just started breaking down crying. This was a short glimpse of what Brooke Hogan is doing

Din tekst har godt indhold men der er et par grammatiske fejl og andet så bliv ved med at øv dig så skulle det være væk i en fart. Min rettelse har været lidt regelløs, i starten laver jeg parenteser med forslag til hvordan du skal rette den, halvvejs inde blev jeg træt af det og lavede "/ rettelse /" tegn i stedet for med mine rettelser, til sidst har jeg lavet en rettelse med "/ rettelse (?)/" spørgsmålstegnet er fordi det virker til du har udeladt noget i den sætning for at den overhovedet giver mening tror du har glemt at skrive at hun var ude af stand til at tale eller noget i den retning. God tekst et par småfejl hist og her som ryger med routine.

Mange tak for din hjælp :) utroligt du har gjort det så godt. :) 1000 tak.

Det er da pænt af Merit-HB at ville hjælpe, men han/hun skulle måske være lidt mere omhyggelig og sikker på sit engelske når han/hun  vil rette andres arbejder.

Det følgende er i hvert fald ikke godt:

1.   Mon vi ikke skulle sige  "her work as a singer"  ??

2.   "which she founds"  ?????   skal det være engelsk ?

3.   "tell"   kan ikke  bruges med et objekt som er en that-sætning

4.   "address that criticism"  -hvad skal det betyde ?

5.   "asks her a question" er helt ok, men her burde det hedde      "asks her if she........."

6.   " a question about if she....."  er helt umuligt på engelsk

7.   "everybody" skal skrives i eet ord

8.   "whom her dream partner is"  skal være "who......."

9.   "and mouthorgan plays"   -skal være  ".........player"

Resten skal der også luges grundigt ud i, men ovenstående er de værste fejl.