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Hej...
Jeg har fået en engelsk stil for til om en uge, og er så småt begyndt med den. Har skrevet en start, og det ville bare være super. hvis der var en der lige ville kigge den igennem og se om der er nogle mega fejl! Er ikke selv så god til engelsk, så den er nok ikke ligefrem 100% fejlfri!
It was a normal night in Chigargo, there was a few clouds on the heaven and the rain began to fall over the quiet city. the lights was lit in all the small houses and only a car, who drived on the slippery way, gave a noice in the dark streets. Romeo was on his way home. He had been to visit one of his best friends. his friend lived in a dirty and grotty house ind the darkest end of Chigargo. he was a (pucher??). Romeo had bought some cheap druks and now he sholud home to youse some of it. he had no job, and get all his money on black-jobs on differented way in the city........
Svar #1
13. september 2009 af Freeclimber (Slettet)
Denne side er OK til diverse rettelser spellcheckplus.com/
Svar #2
13. september 2009 af exatb
It was a normal night in Chigargo, there was were a few clouds on the heaven in the sky and the rain began to fall over the quiet city. the lights was were lit in all the small houses and only a car, who drived which drove on the slippery way, gave a noice in the dark streets. Romeo was on his way home. He had been to visiting one of his best friends. His friend lived in a dirty and grotty house in d the darkest end of Chigargo. He was a pusher(pucher??). Romeo had bought some cheap druks drugs and now he sholud was on his way home to yo use some of it. he had no job, and get got all his money on from black-jobs on in differented way in the city........
Svar #4
13. september 2009 af Stygotius (Slettet)
"an ordinary night in Chicago"
".........and only a car, which was driving on the slippery road....."
"made a noise"
"He had been to visit........ " er udmærket engelsk.
bedre: "he was a drug dealer"
"in different ways"
Man skal bruge punktum mellem to hovedsætninger og stort bogstav derefter.
Svar #5
14. september 2009 af rakijovic
Hæhæ! "Chigargo" -- så bliver moderne dansk udtale da vist ikke værre....
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Svar #7
15. september 2009 af Freeclimber (Slettet)
Gad vide hvem der har givet mig en negativ stemme, for at give et link til en hjemmesidde der kan hjælpe spørger? Syg verden vi lever i ...
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