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Billy Elliot is an 11-year-old boy, who’s living with his father, brother and grandmother. Billy’s mother died when he still was an infant, which has changed the family.
Billy is often alone, and he’s missing his mother a lot.
Billy’s family is very poor, and the whole family is living of the money, which Billy’s father and brother earned as miners.
His not like the other boys in town, who are boxing, Billy loves dancing Ballet.
Billy has some relations in town. Mrs Wilkinson act as a dancing teacher, and as a personal-supporter. She found Billy’s talent, and she’s having a bog effect at Billy’s future, and actually she is recommended Billy at the Royal Ballet School.
Mrs. Wilkinson’s daughter Debbie spends a lot of time with Billy, it’s his first girl- acquaintance, and I’ll say it’s a childhood-girlfriend.
I think people in town really want Billy succeeded. A man who’s arranged a concert, where the moneys’ go to Billy residence at the Ballet School.
When Billy has been at audition, he’s walking through the town, everybody is asking about the answer from Ballet School. People in town are curious, but I don’t think, they expected the success will be in the way of Ballet.
The prejudice of Ballet is related at Billy’s friend Michael, he is a poof whom we already see in his childhood, where he likes to wear women’s clothing and make-up. That prejudice have also been in Billy’s family.
Svar #1
17. november 2009 af 42earth2 (Slettet)
Her er lige et par småfejl jeg umiddelbart kunne finde:
His [He's/He is] not like the other boys in town, who are boxing
... and actually she is recommended [has recommended/recommended] Billy at the Royal Ballet School.
I think people in town really want Billy succeeded [to succeed]
where the moneys’ go [money goes] to Billy residence at the Ballet School.
Husk i øvrigt at engelsk har pausekomma (og der er dermed ikke de samme komma-regler som på dansk).
Svar #2
17. november 2009 af innocenteyes (Slettet)
Billy Elliot is an 11-year-old boy, who’s living who lives with his father, brother and grandmother. Billy’s mother died when he still was an infant, which has changed the family.
Billy is often alone, and he is missing his mother a lot.
Billy’s family is very poor, and the whole family is living of the money, which Billy’s father and brother earned as miners.
His He is not like the other boys in town who are boxing; Billy loves dancing Ballet.
Jeg har slettet dine sammentrækninger. Det er ikke forkert, men det er mere i talesprog man bruger dem :) Min engelsklærer var i hvertfald glad nok for at jeg ikke brugte dem ;)
Svar #3
17. november 2009 af innocenteyes (Slettet)
Billy has some relations in town. Mrs Wilkinson acts as a dancing teacher and as a personal-supporter. She found Billy’s talent and she is having a big effect on Billy’s future. and Actually she is has recommended Billy at the Royal Ballet School.
Mrs. Wilkinson’s daughter Debbie spends a lot of time with Billy, it is his first girl- acquaintance, and I will say it is a childhood-girlfriend.
I think people in town really wants Billy to succeeded. A man who's has arranged a concert where the moneys’ go to Billy's residence at the Ballet School.
Svar #4
17. november 2009 af innocenteyes (Slettet)
When Billy has been at the audition, he is walking through the town and everybody is asking about the answer from the Ballet School. People in town are curious, but I do not think they expected that the success will be in the way of Ballet.
The prejudice of Ballet is related at to Billy’s friend Michael. Michael is a poof, whom which we already see in his childhood, where he likes to wear womens clothes and make-up. That prejudice have has also been in Billy’s family.
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