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18. november 2009 af Tingesten.xD (Slettet) - Niveau: 9. klasse

Har selv rettet den igennnem nu, så ville lige se om der var noget jeg har overset. På forhånd tak.

Attractions in London

Madame Toussauds: Madame Toussads is a world-famous wax museum. It was created by Madame Toussads in 1835. It contains wax figures, that are so well done, that they look like real people. The museum contain figures of famous singers, actors, royal persons, sport stars and even famous murders.
The London Dungeon: It is lying on Tooley street, and is a lifelike exhibition about horrors trough the history in England.
London Eye: It is the biggest Ferris wheel in the world. The wheel is 135 meters high and it gives a view of 40 km. Once the passengers in London Eye, could see in the garden of Buckingham Palace. The queen didn’t liked that so she used thousands of pounds, to hide the garden from the London Eye passengers.
Premier League: Premier League is a great and famous football stadium.
Tower Of London: It is a castle that lies in the centre of London nearby Themes. It is the oldest building in London, that the government uses. For over 900 years, the Tower of London played a central role, in the London city.
Musicals: The west end in London, is famous for its great and world-famous musicals.
All England Lawn Tennis: All England Lawn Tennis organize the world’s most prestigious tennis tournaments, with participation from the worlds best players.
The parks: The Regents Park: Here there are beautiful gardens, and a lake where people can take a sailing trip. Here is also the London Zoo. Kensington Gardens: It is a park, that belong to the Kensington Palace. The park contain princess Diana’s memorial playground. Bushy Park: Bushy Park has a great population of deer’s. Richmond Park: It is the biggest park in London and it has great, green areas with a big population of plants and animals. Greenwich Park: It is best known for being the navel of the worlds time system: Greenwich Mean Time on an imaginary line dividing the park in two. The park also contain the Greenwich Observatory, which also has a museum. Hyde park: It lies in the centre of London. It has great areas where people are free to for example play football. Hyde park is probably most famous for Speakers Corner, where people can stand and free tell, or discuss their opinions.
St Paul’s Cathedral: The dome is easy to see from the town around. It was built between 1675 and 1710 and it is 85 meters high. Inside the guests can enjoy the mosaics, the great acoustic, the cream-colored Portland stones and many other great works.
Kensington Palace: Kensington Palace is princess Diana’s home.
HMS Belfast: It is a real warship from 1937. It has been remade to a liquid museum, where people can try to see, how it was to live in the ship, in the war.
British museum: It has some of the worlds greatest catheter culture, among other the Rosetta stone and sculptures from Parthenon.


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18. november 2009 af Erik Morsing (Slettet)

Din kommasætning ser mærkelig ud. Du har flere fejl med manglende "s" i 3. person ental. Jeg har sat klamme om nogle af fejlene, kig lige på dem først, så kan jeg kontrollere bagefter. Du kan i stedet bruge overskriften: London Tourist Attractions

Madame Toussauds: Madame Toussads is a world-famous wax museum. It was created by Madame Toussads in 1835. It contains wax figures, that are so well done, that they look like real people. The museum (contain) figures of famous singers, actors, royal persons, sport stars and even famous murders.
The London Dungeon: It is lying on Tooley street, and is a lifelike exhibition about horrors trough (the) history in England.
London Eye: It is the biggest Ferris wheel in the world. The wheel is 135 meters high and it (gives) a view of 40 km. Once the passengers in London (Eye, could) see (in) the garden of Buckingham Palace. The queen didn’t (liked) that so she used thousands of (pounds, to) hide the garden from the London Eye passengers.
Premier League: Premier League is a great and famous football stadium.
Tower Of London: It is a castle that lies in the centre of London nearby (Themes) DET HEDDET THE THAMES.
It is the oldest building in London, that the government uses. For over 900 years, the Tower of London played a central role in the (London city).
Musicals: The west end in London, is famous for its great and world-famous musicals.
All England Lawn Tennis: All England Lawn Tennis (organize) the world’s most prestigious tennis tournaments, with participation from the worlds best players.
The parks: The Regents Park: Here there are beautiful gardens and a lake where people can take a sailing trip. Here is also the London Zoo. Kensington Gardens: It is a park, that belong to the Kensington Palace. The park (contain) princess Diana’s memorial playground. Bushy Park: Bushy Park has a great population of (deer’s). Richmond Park: It is the biggest park in London and it has great, green areas with a big population of plants and animals. Greenwich Park: It is best known for being the navel of the worlds time system: Greenwich Mean Time on an imaginary line dividing the park in two. The park also (contain) the Greenwich Observatory, which also has a museum. Hyde park: It lies in the centre of London. It has great areas where people are free to for example play football. Hyde park is probably most famous for Speakers Corner, where people can stand and (free tell), or discuss their opinions.
St Paul’s Cathedral: The dome is easy to see from the town around. It was built between 1675 and 1710 and it is 85 meters high. Inside the guests can enjoy the mosaics, the great acoustic, the cream-colored Portland stones and many other great works.
Kensington Palace: Kensington Palace is princess Diana’s home.
HMS Belfast: It is a real warship from 1937. It has been remade to a liquid museum, where people can try to see, how it was to live in the ship, (in) the war.
British museum: It has some of the worlds greatest catheter culture, among other the Rosetta stone and sculptures from Parthenon.


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18. november 2009 af exatb

Madame Toussauds: Madame Toussads is a world-famous wax museum. It was created by Madame Toussads in 1835. It contains wax figures, that are so well made done, that they look like real people. The museum contains figures of famous singers, actors, royal persons, sport stars and even famous murderers.
The London Dungeon: It is lying on Tooley street, and it is a lifelike exhibition about horrors through the history of in England.
London Eye: It is the biggest Ferris wheel in the world. The wheel is 135 meters high and it gives a view of 40 km. Once the passengers in London Eye could see in the garden of Buckingham Palace. The queen didn’t like(d) that so she used spent thousands of pounds to hide the garden from the London Eye passengers.
Premier League: Premier League is a great and famous football stadium.
Tower Of London: It is a castle that lies in the centre of London nearby the Thames. It is the oldest building in London to be used by the Government that the government uses. For over 900 years, the Tower of London played a central role in the London city.
Musicals: The west end in London, is famous for its great and world-famous musicals.
All England Lawn Tennis: All England Lawn Tennis organizes the world’s most prestigious tennis tournaments, with participation from the world´s best players .
The parks: The Regents Park: Here there are beautiful gardens, and a lake where people can take a sailing trip. Here is also the London Zoo. Kensington Gardens: It is a park, that belongs to the Kensington Palace. The park contains princess Diana’s memorial playground. Bushy Park: Bushy Park has a great population of deer.deer’s. Richmond Park: It is the biggest park in London and it has great, green areas with a big population of plants and animals. Greenwich Park: It is best known for being the navel of the world´s time system: Greenwich Mean Time on an imaginary line is dividing the park in two. The park also contains the Greenwich Observatory, which also has a museum. Hyde park: It lies in the centre of London. It has great areas where people are free to for example play football for example. Hyde park is probably most famous for Speakers Corner, where people can stand and freely tell, or discuss their opinions.
St Paul’s Cathedral: The dome is easy to see from the surrounding town around. It was built between 1675 and 1710 and it is 85 meters high. Inside the guests can experience enjoy the mosaics, the great acoustic, the cream-colored Portland stones and many other great works.
Kensington Palace: Kensington Palace is princess Diana’s home.
HMS Belfast: It is a real warship from 1937. It has been remade to a liquid museum, where people can try to see, how it was to live in on the ship in during the war.
British museum: It has some of the world`s greatest catheter culture, among other things the Rosetta stone and sculptures from Parthenon.


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