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Rettelse 350 ord? HASTER!!
Hej jeg skal skrive en stil til imorgen.. Jeg skal skrive en stil om hvilken film jeg vil vælge og hvorfor? Og skal dermed også skrive hvad mine planer er, når jeg kommer til Los Angeles.. Så jeg vil meget gern have rettet min stil. :
Hello Universal Studios
First of all, I would like to say thank you for the invitation. Last summer, I auditioned for a role in a movie, and now you have sent a confirmation, saying that I can get a role in the movie. I want to participate. I am so happy that I've gotten the invitation since this is something I've wanted for so long. I will take the next airplane to Los Angeles in America with my best friend. I asked her if she wanted to come to America in Los Angeles with me since I would be starring in a movie. She is really overwhelmed and happy on my behalf and she told me with joy that she would love to go. I chose my best friend because I feel like she understands me, and that she will be there for me when I need it, so it's very perfect. My best friend and I have discussed which movie I should star in. She thinks that I should choose "The Golden Compass", so that is the one I have chosen.
My planning on doing and seeing while I am in Los Angeles are first I must to talk with the actors, and say to them which movie I want to be involved in. And if I have to choose the role I want the most, I have to choose the best role which happens to be the main character, because I would like to be famous. Ever since I was 11 years old, I have dreaming about to be famous. I hope my dreams become true now, when I have the chance. I am really exciting to come to Los Angeles and I hope everything goes, as I want it to be. Actually, there are a lot of thing I want to experience in Los Angeles. I want to enjoy every moment over there. For example I like to see a lot of beautiful building, wonderful restaurants, and buy many beautiful things for myself and my family.
I må meget gerne rette mine formuleringer, ordstillinger, fejl, komma , og meget gerne være opmærksomme, på det med nutid og datid... Jeg skal jo skrive om Los Angeles, før jeg tager derhen..
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Svar #1
30. november 2009 af Dendolq (Slettet)
Hello Universal Studios
Hvem er du?
First of all, I would like to thank you for the invitation. Last summer, I auditioned for a role in the film-hvilken film, and you have sent me a confirmation, saying that I got the role. I am so happy that you gave me the role, since this is something I have wanted for so long. I will take the next airplane to Los Angeles, with my best friend. I asked her if she wanted to come to Los Angeles with me, since I would be starring in a film. She is really overwhelmed and happy on my behalf and she has told me, with joy, that she would love to go. I chose my best friend because, I feel like she understands me, and that she will be there for me, when I need it, for me this arrangement is perfect. My best friend and I have discussed which film I am starring in. She thinks that I should choose "The Golden Compass", and because of that, this is the one I have chosen. I am planning on doing and seeing a lot of things while I am in Los Angeles first I must to talk to the actors,
Jeg nåede ikke længere, jeg har desværre ikke mere tid
and tell them which movie I want to be involved in. And if I have to choose the role I want the most, I have to choose the best role which happens to be the main character, because I would like to be famous. Ever since I was 11 years old, I have dreaming about to be famous. I hope my dreams become true now, when I have the chance. I am really exciting to come to Los Angeles and I hope everything goes, as I want it to be. Actually, there are a lot of thing I want to experience in Los Angeles. I want to enjoy every moment over there. For example I like to see a lot of beautiful building, wonderful restaurants, and buy many beautiful things for myself and my family.
Husk i skrivesprog forkorter man ikke, det gør man kun i talesprog eks. I've= I have
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