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rettes igenem for fejl

14. december 2009 af katarina08 (Slettet)

We had been everywhere and we couldn’t find a way out. My friend started to cry and I comforted him. We had walk for a half hour and we were much tired. I told my friend that we don’t going to die here, and we suddenly were out. He stopped crying, and we talked and fell too asleep. We woke up, we were very thirsty and hungry. We took some water from the gross sea and it teats clammy.
We walked and walked but we couldn’t find a way out, now we were very hungry. Suddenly my friend fell down and I got a choke I didn’t know what I should do?...
 

please hjælp bruges imorgen!:D


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Svar #1
14. december 2009 af Alkymisten (Slettet)

much tired? :-D

Har du overhovedet set den igennem selv? :-)


Svar #2
14. december 2009 af katarina08 (Slettet)

ja er bare ikke så god til engelsk er der andre fejl? :D


Svar #3
14. december 2009 af katarina08 (Slettet)

kan man ikke skrive much tired? :D


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Svar #4
14. december 2009 af Alkymisten (Slettet)

We had been everywhere, and we could not find a way out. My friend started to cry, and I comforted him. We had walked for half an hour, and we were really tired. I told my friend that we were not going to die here, and suddenly we were out.

He stopped crying, and we talked and afterwards we fell asleep. We woke up, and found ourselves to be very thirsty and hungry. We took some water from the gross sea and it teats clammy (?).

We walked and walked but were not able to find a way out, now we were very hungry. Suddenly my friend fell down, I got a choke (?). I did not know what to do.


Svar #5
14. december 2009 af katarina08 (Slettet)

tusind tak :D


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