HASTER!!! Engelsk abstract rettelse :)

Hej skal aflevere min SRP opgave i morgen så tænkte på om der var nogle herinde som er gode til engelsk og har tid til lige at rette mit abstravt til den færdige opgave :)?

- På forhånd tak :)

Dansk:

Projektet undersøger den kristne sekt The Family, som en tidligere præst i Califorinien, Moses David oprettede, som en forlængelse af ungdomsoprøret i 1960’erne, hvor samfundet var præget af hippie-kulturen. Denne undersøgelse analyserer den kristne sekt The Family, ved brug af forskellige omvendelses-, og frafaldsteorier, vha. inddragelses af relevante uddrag fra Miriams bog ”Heaven’s Harlots, som er relevant for dette emne, fordi Miriam er et tidligere medlem af The Family. Desuden bliver der i projektet gjort rede for dens historie, samt vigtige religiøse forestillinger i The Family, og for at sammenfatte projektet bliver der til sidst vurderet om der har været kritik, omkring beskyldningerne mod The Family’s rekrutteringsmetoder. Resultaterne af analysen var, at gå i dybden, med de medlemmer som havde været i sekten, og finde frem til at de alle sammen havde haft en dyster fortid, med prostitution, og hjernevask i kolonierne i The Family. Kritikken indeholdt mange kritiske synspunkter, omkring The Family’s rekrutteringsmetoder, bl.a. omkring den såkaldte Flirty Fishing metode, som blev brugt fra starten af 1974 til slutningen af 1987. i denne metode brugte man ”religiøs prostitution”, får at hverve nye medlemmer til sekten, hvilket resulterede i at en forfærdelig masse børn blev født, mange fik AIDS, og offentligheden fik for første gang øjnene op for hvad der egentlig var bag facaden. 

Engelsk:

The project examines the Christian sect The Family, as a former priest in Califorinien, Moses, David created as an extension of the youth rebellion in the 1960s, when society was dominated by hippie culture. This study examines the Christian sect The Family, using a variety of repentance and drop-theories, using the involvement of relevant extracts from Miriam's book "Heaven's Harlot, which is relevant to this issue because Miriam is a former member of The Family. Moreover, the project explained its history, and key religious ideas in The Family, and to summarize the project will be finally assessed whether there has been criticism about the allegations against The Family's recruiting methods. The results of the analysis was to go in depth, with those members who had been in the sect, and find that they all had a grim past, prostitution, and brainwashing in the colonies in The Family. Reviews contained many critical views about The Family's recruiting methods, including around the so-called Flirty Fishing method that was used from early 1974 to the end of 1987. in this method were used "religious prostitution" get recruiting new members to the sect, which resulted in an awful lot of children were born, many had AIDS, and the public got the first wake up to what was really behind the facade.