hjælp til rettelse af engelsk.

Hej, jeg har virkelig prøv for en som vil være virkelig skøn, at kigge noget af mit engelsk igenenm
for fejl.
-Det er meget svært at se sine egne fejl. (':
 

He is last seen searching for the “source” in Rom, Italia. According to one of the myths, there is a “source” which has total destructive force in form of fire, air, water and earth powers.
If he kills the “source” he will get the powers, and be the most powerful man in the world.
Nobody knows if the myths are true.
The Hunter is a very muscular man, and he does always wear a long black coat, and black pants. What characteristic him most are his one brown eye, and his one green eye, and his aggressive behavior, and of course his scar that shows he is a half-blood.
Ever human  on earth, knows him as the Hunter!
He is almost invincible! The “source” and other half-bloods are the only ones who can eliminate him. Sherlock the Hunter is a very dangerous man; so do not judge him because he is half-blood. He is maybe a half-blood but because of his powers, is he total destructive to the humanity and the planet. He is a killer machine, and he does not stop before he has killed the “source”.

- tusind tak på forhånd!