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He is last seen searching for the “source” in Rom, Italia. According to one of the myths, there is a “source” which has total destructive force in form of fire, air, water and earth powers.
If he kills the “source” he will get the powers, and be the most powerful man in the world.
Nobody knows if the myths are true.
The Hunter is a very muscular man, and he does always wear a long black coat, and black pants. What characteristic him most are his one brown eye, and his one green eye, and his aggressive behavior, and of course his scar that shows he is a half-blood.
Ever human and Na’vi’ on earth, knows him as the Hunter!
He is almost invincible! The “source” and other half-bloods are the only ones who can eliminate him. Sherlock the Hunter is a very dangerous man; so do not judge him because he is half-blood. He is maybe a half-blood but because of his powers, is he total destructive to the humanity and the planet. He is a killer machine, and he does not stop before he has killed the “source”.
So beware if you meet this man, for God’s sake, do not make him angry! He is very dangerous!

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jeg kan ikke rigtig se fejlen ved denne her sætning : he does always wear

Man bruger ikke to do + verbum i ikke-nægtende sætninger medmindre man ligefrem pointerer det.

På dansk kunne man fremhæve/lægge tryk på "har": "Han HAR altid en lang sort frakke på", men det vil man jo kun gøre, hvis nogen lige har sagt, at han ikke har den på.

Så "He always wears..." vil være den korrekte måde at begynde sætningen på.