Engelsk
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jeg har en summery her men er ikke sikker på det er rigtig vil i hjælpe mig med at ret det?
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Slavery
The slavery group started to tell us a bit about the definition of the word slavery. Marie presented the definition of slavery and what a slave is. Slaves are the people who are owned or controlled by their owners or employers, the slaves were forced to work by threat both mental and physical. They were bought and sold as the owner´s properties. These facts were some very good facts but it was a little difficult to me to understand what Marie exactly said because, I think she was a little nervous and she wasn´t well prepared according to my opinion.
But the others in the group were very well prepared and gave us lots of useful facts, as where did the word (slave) origin came from, where the slaves did came from how many died and so on. Actually personally I didn´t knew about their singing and dancing traditions and not at all that it was a mixture of original African and Europeans music traditions. I really want to listen to their music because i want to feel their feelings through themselves and only a slave can express the feeling they had that time. Through the presentation I felt how hard it was to be black at that time. Maybe it was harder than to be an unaccepted foreign.
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Svar #1
17. marts 2010 af Stygotius (Slettet)
The slavery group started to tell us a bit about the definition of the word slavery. Marie presented the definition of slavery and what a slave is. Slaves are (the) people who are owned or controlled by their owners or employers, the slaves were forced to work (by) under both mental and physical threats ( both mental and physical). They were bought and sold as (the owner´s) property(ies) of the owner. These facts were (some) very (good facts) useful, but it was a little difficult (to) for me to understand what Marie exactly said because(, I think) she was a little nervous and (she wasn´t) not very well prepared (according to) in my opinion.
(But t)The other(s in) members of the group were, however, very well prepared and gave us lots of useful facts, as for instance where (did) the word "slave" originally (came) from,-where the slaves(did) came from, -how many of them died etc. (and so on). Actually personally I didn´t knew about their singing and dancing traditions and not at all that it was a mixture of original African and Europeans music traditions????? . I really want to listen to their music because (i) I want to experience(feel) their feelings through themselves and only a slave can express the feeling they had at that time. Through the presentation I felt how hard it was to be black at that time. Maybe it was harder than (to) being an unaccepted foreigner.
Svar #2
17. marts 2010 af Explosive (Slettet)
Actually personally I didn´t knew about their singing and dancing traditions and not at all that it was a mixture of original African and Europeans music traditions?????
Du kan da give et mere seriøst svar end bare at skrive ?????..
Actually, I didn't know much about their traditions of singing and dancing, especially the fact that is was a mixture of original African and European music tradition.
Mit bedste bud - men kommer fra en 2.g elev med engelsk på B-niveau STX.. Du bedømmer jo selv om det er bedre end et par spørgsmålstegn.
Svar #3
17. marts 2010 af Stygotius (Slettet)
Du skal Fandeme ikke blande dig i min måde at rette på !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Spørgsmålstegn betyder at sætningen er uforståelig og at forfatteren selv må skrive den om.
Svar #4
17. marts 2010 af Explosive (Slettet)
Så forstår jeg ikke alle de andre rettelser af de også uforståelige sætninger.
Du fortsætter bare, skal nok lade være med at blande mig.
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