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24. marts 2010 af natasjah (Slettet) - Niveau: A-niveau

hej

This year we have decided to hold a meeting too the salesmen of the company.

The meeting begins with a presentation of the new autumn collection which can be ordered in favourable prices: all models in stock for immediate delivering. Besides we have invited a known trend spotter, which will tell about the tendency of this time inside fashion.

In connection with the autumn collection we will introduce a special offer, which include new payment and deliverance condition. We also grant considerable discount on orders given before 31 august. Contemporary there are 5 % discount on order over £ 50.000.

After the meeting you will be a host to a light lunch

tak på forhånd


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Svar #1
25. marts 2010 af Mufflan (Slettet)

too = to  (men måske ville jeg bruge "for" ?)

august = August

var bare et hurtigt kig


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Svar #2
25. marts 2010 af Andersen11 (Slettet)

all models are in stock for immediate delivering delivery

trend spotter??, which who will tell talk about the tendency of this time inside fashion ???

which includes new payment and deliverance delivery conditions

We also grant give considerable discounts on orders given placed before 31 august August 31.

Contemporary Currently there are is a 5 % discount on orders over £ 50.000

After the meeting you will be a host to a light lunch ?? host at a light lunch? served a light lunch?


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Svar #3
25. marts 2010 af exatb

...who will talk about fashion trends


Svar #4
25. marts 2010 af natasjah (Slettet)

taRk for jeres rettelser.


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Svar #5
25. marts 2010 af Stygotius (Slettet)

1.  "ordered (in)  at favourable prices"

 2.  "..............deliverance conditions"   nej,    -skriv:   "new terms of payment and delivery"

3.  "orders (given) placed before 31 (a)August"

4.  "a well-known trendspotter"

5.  "tell about the tendency of this time inside fashion."   nej  -skriv:   "give a talk on contemporary fashion"  eller

     "talk about current trends in fashion"

6.  "a special offer, which includes........."

7.  "to host a lunch" betyder at være vært ved en frokost.

8.  "After the meeting (you will be a host) to a light lunch"  skriv:  " We take pleasure in inviting you to a light lunch after the meeting."


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