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He killed everyone who stands in his way; his goal was to kill the “source” who according to the legend was the most powerful person on earth. If he killed that person, he would become invincible.
According to the myths he was (efterladt) when he was a child, and because of that episode his dark side took over his body and soul. If is legend is true no one knows.
Fifteen years has passed by and Aicha grew up and became/become a beautiful and clever young lady unaware about her past and her gift.
Everything seemed to be perfect, but it was not.
Aicha found a letter in her “mother’s” desk, a letter she never should have found.
The letter contained a whole list, about every surviving half-blood’s on Earth, her name was on that list and she knew what that meant.
Everything fell into place, her strange dreams about her past, and the strange things she had experienced; voices in her head, close friends who died, dead flowers, flowered again after she had touched it, and also why she felt different.
A year passed by and her anxiety to be found became bigger and bigger.
She was so scared of everything; she knew it could mean her death if someone found out that she was a half-blood, so she ran away (I håb om at rede sit eget liv).
She vanished for two years and in that time, she found her inner calm/peace and she learnt how to handle her powers.
Aicha became quickly a national hero; she had rescued over 1 million people, from the evil half-bloods, who only wanted to create fear and panic among the humans and the L’vi’s.

- jeg vil virkelig sætte pris på, at en ville se efter fejl / skrive hvor der er fejl. Da jeg har meget svært ved at se mine egne fejl.

tusind tak på forhånd.