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Jarlen af Bothwell, den berømte skotske adelsmand, var protestant, men ønskede ikke, at Skotland skulle forenes med England. I en alder af 24 år måtte han drage udenlands og rejste i årevis omkring i Europa. Han besøgte også Danmark, hvor han løb bort med en ung adelsdame, som han senere forlod.
Efter talrige eventyr blev han kaldt hjem af Marie Stuart, som han hurtigt bedårede og fuldstændig fik i sin magt. Han blev en af hendes trofaste hjælpere og tog del i mordet på Darnley, som fandt sted i februar 1567. Allerede den 15. Maj samme år lod hun sig bortføre af ham for at ægte ham. Bothwell stod nu på sin magts højde, idet han i virkeligheden var Skotlands ukronede konge. Men dette varede ikke længe. Skotlands adel gjorde oprør. Marie blev taget til fange for senere at lide døden på skafottet, Bothwell måtte for anden gang forlade sit fædreland.
Hans skab blev af stormen drevet til Norge, hvorfra han efter at være blevet arresteret blev ført til København til Frederik den Anden. Denne nægtede at udlevere ham til Skotland, men holdt ham som fange i 11 år, det meste af tiden på Dragsholm Slot, hvor han døde 1578. Han blev begravet i den nærliggende kirke.

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Earl of Bothwell, the famous Scottish nobleman, was Protestant, but did not want Scotland to reconcile with England. At the age of 24 years he had to go abroad and traveled for years around in Europe. He also visited Denmark, where he ran away with an young noblewoman whom he later left.
After numerous adventures, he was called home by Marie Stuart, which he quickly “bedårede ( hvordan siger man bedårede) “and totally got into his power. He was one of her loyal mates and took part in murder of Darnley, which took place in February 1567th Already 15 May the same year she let herself abduct him in order to marry him. Bothwell was now at its height of power, while he was in fact Scotland's uncrowned king. But this did not last long. Scottish nobles rebelled. Marie was captured and then later put to death on the scaffold, Bothwell had for the second time leaving his homeland.
His closet was the storm-driven to Norway, where he, after being arrested were taken to Copenhagen to Frederick the Second. This refused to extradite him to Scotland, but kept him as prisoner for 11 years, most of the time on Dragsholm Castle where he died 1578th He was buried in the nearby church.