Rette engelsk ?

Hej.

Jeg har virkelige bruge for en der kan rette min engelsk stil, da mine venner ikke gider gør det og de tænker kun på sig selv :(. Derfor er det eneste sted jeg kan få hjælp fra, er her ind.

Hvis der er en der gider at rette hele min stil når jeg bliver færdig, vil jeg være meget glad. Den er ca. på 700 ord. og skal afleveres idag.

Men indtil nu, vil jeg have en skal rette det her styk:

The protagonist tells about Jed Cunningham. She says that he was the coolest guy in high school who all followed. But although he was tough, he might not like being seen as popular. She also tells that he used to be natural and wild and he exploits weekdays to get the best out of it. His manta was that you live for the day. He was very intelligent. She also describes his appearance as tall, black hair with a tuft at the front, blue eyes, broad shouldered, so skinny, hither mouth vurved into a Sardonic smile. The last thing she knows about him is that he is living alone in a remote location at sea. with his dog, Roger.