HJÆLP TIL RETTELSE AF KORT TEKST

Hej jeg håber virkelig der er en/et par søde hoveder som kan hjælpe mig med at rette den stil, da jeg ofte selv har svært ved at se mine egne felj : ( .. hvis det er for krævende et arbejde,  kan i markere fejlen og jeg må derefter selv rette den..



What happened?
Our life consists of many emotional experiences and every important day of our life will always be remembered:”Our first day at school, our first friend, our first real pain and our first happiness”. Those important days will leave deep emotional marks in our soul forever.
Jennifer Moss turned over the pages with her gnarled fingers, slowly and very gently..
She followed her own handwriting which reminded her about her life as a young woman.
Many years have passed since she received the diary as a gift from her parents, she distinctly remembers the day! She had finally graduated the school, the sun shined and she felt happy and free.. Normally the daily life was difficult and chaotic. The nation was invaded by German people which had turned England into a big nightmare to reside in.
Jennifer closed her eyes for a second and imagined herself sitting in the veranda and watching all the noise outside while her little sister Veronica cried in the background and her parents tried to stay strong and hide their fear for the unacceptable.. A feeling of anger and pain filled up her body.. Jennifer turned over many of the pages until something captured her eyes. A picture of a young boy in an age of 18 was plastered solid to the diary. Jennifer hugged the book close into her heart while she focused on the boy in the picture. Her heart throbbed when she thought of him and all the time they had spent together. He was her first true love and although she has been in love many times since then, he will always be an important person in her life. He opened her eyes to a whole new world of deep emotional feelings.

Jennifer leaned back while she flicked trough the pages in the diary which was filled with important episodes from her life:” Her wedding, her children’s birth, her own birthday..” Her life hasn’t been trouble-free but it has been like many other people. She had experienced joy and sorrow, but she was still glad of what she had achieved and proud of the women she had become.
Jennifer smiled an enormous smile, her life was something special like all the experiences she had been trough..

Our life is the biggest and most valuable gift on earth and we have to be grateful for the opportunity to live. All the experiences and choice we make will develop us and make us stronger as human