Rettelse af engelsk

death - skal være "dead"

over owen - skal være "our own"

Færre kommaer. (If in doubt, leave it out) ;-)

Characterize the two characters. What do we learn about them from what they think, say and feel about each other?

Murchison:
Murchison loathes Bargave, but he can’t figure out why(,); he just feels (hate towards)  a hatred ofBargave.

He is frustrated and a bit confused (over) by the silly quarrel. He hates Bargave, but for what reason, that’s a good question. Murchison might feel sorry for Bargave in the beginning of the story(. B), but when he realizes that he too is death, he (then) doesn’t feel(s) sorry for Bargave any longer.

Bargave:
His ghost is haunting Murchison, and I (T)think that Bargave ...................???
I think that Bargave wants revenge over Murchison because he didn’t rescue(d) him.

Comment on the ending.
The ending of the short short story is rather surprising. I had not predicted that Murchison also would die in the end. It is an open ending which means that the narrator allows us to come up with (over) each our own possible ending. In this way we add a little more excitement.

I think that the ending is good. The ending captured me because I had not expected (that) Murchison (would also) to die as well.