Charles Andrew Williams rettelse!

1. linje: "at the age of 15"

(der behøves ikke komme før "and") 

3. linje: (the previous events?)

8. linje (was named for pussy? Blev han kaldt pussy eller...?)

9. linje "his father" (ikke komme før when)

10. linje "to a town called..."

11. linje "the Naval..."

12. linje "a group of skateboarders"

Til Linje 8 jaa han blev kaldt for pussy..

"He was called a pussy by the other children" 

 Warning

The article is about a school shooting in Santee, California on Santana High. Andy Williams, a boy (at) of 15, shot and killed 2 students, and injured 13 (more) others. While the article primarily focuses on the background and previous events that led (up) to the tragedy, we (do) also get a brief description of the events at Santana High (the) on 5(th of) March 2001. At 9:20 a.m. Williams took out a .22 calibre revolver and fired shots into a bathroom and a courtyard. He kept firing and reloading for 6 minutes, and a total of 30 rounds were discharged before the local sheriff's deputies cornered Andy Williams in the bathroom, where he handed over his gun.

Andy Williams is a convicted American (murderer) killer. At the age of 15, he was (the perpetrator of) responsible for the 2001 shooting. Andy was a lonely boy. He was bullied at school and was (named for)  dubbed "pussy" by the other students. He had problems at home. His mother Linda and his father Jeffery got divorced(,) when he was five (years old). After the divorce(,) he rarely saw his mother. Andy moved to California less than two years (ago) before a town rural Maryland????. After a spell in the town of 29 Palms?????, his dad got a job as a lab technician for Naval Medical Center in San Diego, and the two moved to Santee. Andy (would not) didn't want to live with his father(,) so he got his own apartment. Andy met a (band) group of drug addicted Skateboarders (who took drugs). In the end Andy was (condemned) sentenced to 50 years imprisonment.

Det er bestemt ikke nogen dårlig engelsk tekst. Den kan du godt være stolt af !

 P.S.

1.  "skateboarders"  i stedet for  "Skateboarders"

2.  "divorced " i stedet for "got divorced "

Not: 50 years imprisonment but 500 years. :)

 Nååå, mon dog ?  ...........5oo års fængsel ?

Nej undskyld, min fejl.

Læste teksten og så at der stod at dette KUNNE resultere i 500 års fængselstid, men da jeg slog det op på nettet stod der ganske rigtigt 50 år. :)

29 Palms er navnet på en by i California; navnet skrives dog sædvanligvis Twentynine Palms.