Engelsk
Rettelse af MEGET kort tekst :)
Hey, det kunne være dejligt hvis en af jer derude gad at rette nedenstående tekst. Det er lige meget med indholdet, bare det grammatiske :)
A Travel Piece is a shortstory written by Margaret Atwood.The shortstory is about Anette which is a travel writer. She is on her way home from an exotic vacation but the plane gets some errors. She is forced to make an emergency landing in the middle of the ocean with the rest of the plane. The plane sinks into the water and she ends up in an emergency boat with five other people. Bill, Verna, Greg, Julia and Mike. After some while in the boat, they get the idea to protect themselves against the strong sun above them. They use their coats, but it gets too hot after a while. Then they make masks of metal trays that contained food, on the plane. After a few days in the boat without any help, Greg drinks seawater. Bill and Mike stops him and it ends up that Anette will experience something very inhuman. They all wanna slit up Greg’s throath with a knife that Bill has brought. And now it's where Anette must decide if she wants a part of it or not.
Svar #1
18. september 2010 af Nik_ (Slettet)
"A Travel Piece" is a short story written by Margaret Atwood.The short story is about Anette who is a travel writer. She is on her way home from an exotic vacation but the plane gets into technical difficulties and is forced to make an emergency landing in the middle of the ocean. The plane sinks into the water and she ends up in a lifeboat with five other people; Bill, Verna, Greg, Julia and Mike. After a while in the boat, they get the idea to protect themselves against the strong sun. They use their coats, but it gets too hot after a while. Instead they start to make masks of metal trays that contained food on the plane. After a few days in the boat without any help, Greg drinks seawater. Bill and Mike stops him and in the end Anette experiences something very inhuman. They all wanna slit up Greg’s throath with a knife that Bill has brought and that's when Anette must decide if she wants to be a part of it or not.
Svar #2
18. september 2010 af Nik_ (Slettet)
Tror nu nok jeg ville omskrive/uddybe de sidste par linier lidt ;)
Skriv et svar til: Rettelse af MEGET kort tekst :)
Du skal være logget ind, for at skrive et svar til dette spørgsmål. Klik her for at logge ind.
Har du ikke en bruger på Studieportalen.dk?
Klik her for at oprette en bruger.
