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er der nogle der vil rette min engelsk mini opgave jeg har selv prøvet at rette det men jeg er virkelig dårligt til engelsk så jeg vil bare spørge om der er nogle der vil rette min engelsk opgave.

This year, there had been a series of crises of the City. First, workers on the city's largest steel plant on strike. The news media wrote about a brawl at the gates of growth. Two hundred police officers had to ensure that buses with strike breakers
could enter the factory area.
Shortly afterwards discovered some anglers that many fish had died of poisoning and that there were almost no salmon left in the River.
The specialists made several assessments of the situation and gathered all relevant information but after 3 weeks they had not been made yet. The authorities feared that thousands of sheep cows and calves grazed on the meadows along the river bank would be poisoned. Or what was worse: life would be lost. Later the city was hit by earthquakes and 7 women were killed under collapsed houses. Many people were injured, including many children. Disasters seemed set to continue, and the authorities declared the city in a state of emergency

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