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Engelsk stil - rettelse. (english)
Nogen der lige har lyst til at tage et lille kig på denne engelsk stil :). den skal afleveres imorgen, og jeg tror der er rimelig mange fejl i (:
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A dark and windy night.
“It was a dark and windy night. I walked trough the city, all alone. It had been a great party, and I was very drunk. I walked around in my own world. I was so engrossed that I did even noticed the man, who followed me. It was first somewhere near the park, I heard him. Or was it? I knew that someone was behind me, but he walked the exact same way as me. My heart beat an extra time. What should I do? Run, keep walking? I had no idea, I was so afraid that I forgot how drunk I was. I started running, and now I was for sure, he was following me. He started running to.
What the fuck is I supposed to do now? I’m 22 years old and way too young to die. I thought.
I was only a few blocks from my apartment, but if I ran home, he would know where I lived.
It’s funny how empty the streets was that night, there used to be a lot of people on the street at that time of the night, but not that night, off course. I was always unfortunate, but never in this extent.
I could here that he was right behind me, and then everything became black.
When I woke up the next morning, I didn’t know where I was, and I had no idea what had happened. I was scared, very scared. It was not my own apartment I found myself in.
I was not alone, I could here someone on the other site of the wall, but I had no idea of who it could be. I knew that it had to be the man who followed me yesterday, but not what he wanted me.
He opened the door, pushed a glass of water into me, and then closed and locked the door again. I didn’t drink thwater. I knew that it wasn’t clean water, cause why would he give me that.
I knew that something would happen to me, unless I got out of there. I could get out of the door because it was locked and then he would see or hear me. There was no other way out then a little window, but it was also lucked and there was no handle. I had to crush it, and I did.
We were at second floor, at least.
I jumped and hoped for the best.
Just before I hit the ground, I woke up and could hardly breathe and realised that it was all just a dream.
- håber der er en der vil hjælpe.
- i hope someone will help me :)
A.S.A.P!!!!!!!!!!
Svar #1
05. oktober 2010 af Stygotius (Slettet)
“It was a dark and windy night. I walked trough the city, all alone. It had been a great party, and I was very drunk. I walked around in my own world. I was so engrossed that I did even noticed the man(,) who followed me. (It was first) At first it was somewhere near the park, I heard him. Or was it? I knew that someone was behind me, but he walked (the) exactly the same way as (me) I did. My heart beat an extra time. What should I do? Run, keep walking? I had no idea, I was so afraid that I forgot how drunk I was. I started running, and now I was (for) sure(,) that he was following me. He started running to.
What the fuck (is) am I supposed to do now? , I thought. I’m 22 years old and way too young to die. (I thought).
I was only a few blocks from my apartment, but if I ran home(,) he would know where I lived.
It’s funny how empty the streets (was) were that night, and there used to be a lot of people (on) in the street at that time of the night, but not that night, of(f) course. I was always unfortunate, but never (in) to this extent.
I could (here) hear that he was right behind me, and then everything became black.
When I woke up the next morning(,) I didn’t know where I was, and I had no idea what had happened. I was scared, very scared. It was not my own apartment I found myself in.
I was not alone, I could (here) hear someone on the other (site) side of the wall, but I had no idea (of) who it could be. I knew that it had to be the man who followed me yesterday, but not what he wanted me.
He opened the door, (pushed) forced a glass of water into me, and then closed and locked the door again. I didn’t drink the water. I knew that it wasn’t clean water, because why would he give me that(.) ?
I (knew) realised that something would happen to me(,) unless I got out of there. I could not get out (of) through the door (because) since it was locked and (then) even if I could he would see or hear me. There was no other way out (then a little) than by a small window, but (it) this was also (lucked) locked, and there was no handle. I had to (crush) break it, and I did.
We were (at) on second floor, at least.
I jumped and hoped for the best.
Just before I hit the ground, I woke up and could hardly breathe and realised that it (was) had all been just a dream.
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