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The battle of Bannockburn in 1314 and the one that took place at Culloden in 1746 are two of the bloodiest battles that have been fought between England and Scotland. The former battle ended with a brilliant victory to Robert Bruce and his Scottish partisans, while the latter became a crushing defeat to the Highlanders who fought for “Bonnie Prince Charlie” and his right to the Scottish crown.

<span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-font-family:Times-Roman;mso-bidi-font-family: Times-Roman;mso-ansi-language:EN-US">Robert Bruce was crowned King of Scotland in 1306. At that time it was a custom that the Scottish kings were crowned in Scone and for 500 years they had, during this ceremony, been sitting on the Stone of Scone. Meanwhile the English King Edward I had removed the stone during one of his campaigns in 1296 and placed it in Westminster Abbey where it has remained for the last 700 years. The current English Queen was crowned on exactly this old “Stone of Destiny” in 1953.</o:p>

<span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-font-family:Times-Roman;mso-bidi-font-family: Times-Roman;mso-ansi-language:EN-US">Bruce’s crowning was dramatic: he murdered his rival, “the Red Comyn”, in the church in Dumfries and afterwards he rode to Scone in a hurry to take over the Crown. Comyn was one of those vassals who King Edward had installed in his attempt to make Scotland to English territory, and the killing was a part of the Scottish fight for freedom which had begun under Sir William Wallace.<span lang="EN-US" style="mso-ansi-language: EN-US"></o:p>

<span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-font-family:Times-Roman;mso-bidi-font-family: Times-Roman;mso-ansi-language:EN-US">Wallace beat the well-trained English armed forces at Stirling Bridge and Bruce did the same 17 years later at Bannockburn. In both cases the English army was far greater in strength than the one the Scots could muster, but even the dreaded archers who were to be England’s trump card in the Hundred Years’ War in France were bound to give way to Bruce’s spearmen, who fought with desperate courage.</o:p>

<span lang="EN-US" style="mso-fareast-font-family:Times-Roman;mso-bidi-font-family: Times-Roman;mso-ansi-language:EN-US">Unfortunately Wallace was betrayed of his own men and did not survive the fight for freedom, but Bruce and James Douglas did. These two national heroes continued stubbornly the resistance until Edward III abandoned all demands to Scottish territory only fourteen years later and Bruce was recognized as the lawful king of Scotland.