Engelsk rettelse.

Hej er der nogen kloge "englændere" der kan rette min stil, for fejl? tror ikke der er så mange, men vil gerne have en rettelsem og i må meget gerne sætte rettelserne i parantes, eller med streg under. Mange tak :)

Immigration in England is not a new phenomenon. In the last century for example there was immigration by Irishmen, but the integration of those in the community was relatively smooth, at least for the Englishmen themselves.
It was immediately after the Second World War the problems started to show up, which are typically for a mixed community. Many colored people are fled of the poverty and the misery in the previous British colonies. Some have had political unrest in their home country, which also played an important role, because it has been hard to get the democracy to work by the autonomy. Others have been thinking about the education, and also in this respect, England has been considered as the Promised Land.
But dream and reality have been proved to be many different things. Now the Englishmen feel that many immigrants have been a threat. For example, it has been feared, that they will do more pressure at the housing markets, reduce the school standard, and that they will steal the jobs from the country’s white population. The unemployment and the recession in the 70s have contributed to a tightening of conflicts between the whites and the colored. A bloody collision between the police and 200 Westindians in January 1978, which was demonstrated in Wolverhampton could be used as an example. The increased connectivity to the National Front should be seen as the background for the situation. It is not a coincidence, that the party, which many believe has a Neo-Nazi ideology, has repatriation of colored at the program.
Even though many Englishmen agree that the immigration should be stopped, it doesn’t mean that they also vote for National Front. The part has not succeeded in being represented at the parliament, 5% of the votes they received are at some by-elections, and they received about 20% at local-elections at some areas in London.