1086 online og ingen kan hjælpe mig??

 Jeg er ikke sikker på hvad du spørger om.

Jeg har fået skrevet det her

 Scottish Travel Centre
Hello Mrs. Jorgensen here is a guide you can look at
Tel: (031) 5575 522
You have to visit the Scottish Tourist Board’s Travel Centre for expert information and I will guide you on all aspects of Scotland all kinds of reservations including Rail, Coach, Ferry and Air Tickets, and Car Rental or you can just browse through the extensive Scottish bookshop. Run in partnership with Keith Prowse travel we are your gateway to the hole of Scotland.
You can come another day if you have a question
For comprehensive information on Edinburgh you can see, Accommodation Reservations and Tour Tickets
Visit the Edinburgh Tourist Centre just across from the travel Centre at Waverley Market, Princes Street
You can come another day if you have a question
This is my Tel: (031) 557 1700
You can see opening hours here
June–October Monday–Saturday 08.30–20.00 hrs.
Sunday 10.00 hrs. – 18.00 hrs.
October – June; 09.00 hrs. – 17.30 hrs.
Saturday 09.00 hrs. – 13.00 hrs. Sunday closed
 

Men vil bare lige vide om det er rigtigt da jeg skal guide min lære dvs. jeg skal fortælle hende om hvad Scottish Travel Centre Tak på forhånd

 Det er måske bedre at skrive "the entire Scotland" frem for "the hole". :)

Desuden synes jeg det er lidt forvirrende med åbningstiderne - fra begyndelsen af juni til begyndelsen af Oktober, eller hvordan skal det forstås?

Jeg skal guide min lære via den her tekst jeg har åbningstiderne er noget jeg vil slut af med når jeg har guídet hende

Kan du se flere fejl den rigtige er dene nedenunder

Tak på forhånd :)

Hello Dear Mrs Jorgensen

here is the Scottish Travel Centre

I enclose a guide for you (can look at) to look through
Tel: (031) 5575 522
You have are invited to visit the Scottish Tourist Board’s Travel Centre for expert information and I will guide you on all aspects of Scotland including all kinds of reservations including. Your reservations booking may include ing many things Rail, Coach, Ferry and Air Tickets, and Car Rental. or y You can also just browse through the extensive Scottish bookshop. Run Operating in partnership with Keith Prowse travel we are your gateway to the whole of Scotland.
You can come are welcome to call another day if you have any further questions
For comprehensive information on Edinburgh you can please see, Accommodation Reservations and Tour Tickets
Visit the Edinburgh Tourist Centre just across from the (t)Travel Centre at Waverley Market, Princess Street
(You can come another day if you have a question)
This is my Tel: (031) 557 1700
(You can see o)Opening hours are (here)
June–October Monday–Saturday 08.30–20.00 hrs.
Sunday 10.00 hrs. – 18.00 hrs.
October – June; 09.00 hrs. – 17.30 hrs.
Saturday 09.00 hrs. – 13.00 hrs. Sunday closed
Food Meals included
Smoking ban
I recommend you to see that you visit the Edinburgh castle
all the food we do is healthy

Konstruktionen er lidt abstrakt. Kan du ikke få det til at være mere sammenfaldende? Og der en hel del fejl at spotte :-S

En MEGET overfladisk rettelse...

I hereby introduce this guide to you which you can undergo further if you desire.

Tel: (031) 5575 522

You are hereby invited to the Scottish Tourist Board’s Travel Centre for expert information  compromising a exclusive guide on all aspects of Scotland including all kinds of reservations. Your reservations may include different aspects such as Rail, Coach, Ferry and Air Tickets, and Car Rental or you can simply just browse through the extensive Scottish bookshop. Operating in a partnership with Keith Prowse travel we are YOUR gateway to the entire Scotland. Provided that you any sort of questions regarding our services, you are welcome to call us anytime. For comprehensive information on Edinburgh please refer to Accommodation Reservations and Tour Tickets. You can Visit the Edinburgh Tourist Centre just across the Travel Centre at Waverley Market, Princess Street anytime if you have further concerns regarding our services.