Rettelse af engelsk-stil, 200 ord :-)

 ..............ret uhyggeligt at der findes mennesker med disse holdninger  til dødsstraf.

Du har ikke overvejet, at der stadig eksisterer dødstraf i samtlige lande og 36 stater i U.S.A. Jeg går ikke ind for dødsstraf, men jeg diskuterer det bare i min stil. Det var desuden heller ikke mit spørgsmål...

Jeg betoner desuden, at det kun er principielt, der er nogen der fortjener det.
Desuden er der mange der rent faktisk gerne vil dø, frem for at sidde og blive sindsyge i et fængsel hele deres liv.

 Der findes ikke dødsstraf i "samtlige lande", f.eks. ikke i noget i Europa.

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Du skriver "Jeg går ikke ind for dødsstraf ". I så tilfælde er denne og de følgende udtalelser selvmodsigende.

1. "My opinion on the death penalty is both positive and negativ"

2. "there are some people who deserve to die because of the crimes they have committed"

3. "I think someone like Karla Faye Tucker deserved life in prison or to be executed." 

4. "Ultimately, I do not think that we should introduce capital punishment in Denmark, even though someone deserves it."

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Dit engelsk er ret godt !!!

My opinion (on) of the death penalty is both positive and negative. In principle(, there are) some people (who) deserve to die because of the crimes they have committed. The problem is that it costs too much money to find out whether it is the right person you are about to execute. (It is just as inhumane to e(Executing(e) someone is just as inhumane as (it (is to) committing a murder is. I think life imprisonment is enough punishment. There is also a very big discussion about whether to execute women or not. I think someone like Karla Faye Tucker deserved (life in) prison for life or to be executed. She was executed, but many were in turmoil because she was a woman. I do not understand that because we are all (people) equal human beings, and women (commit crimes as far) as well as men commit crimes.
There has also been considerable focus on black people. This indicates that people are more willing to execute blacks than whites. (.........No logic in this) This is very unfair in my (eyes) view. In the song about Rubin Carter(,) it's clear that Bob Dylan makes it a big issue (deal out of) that he was convicted wrongly and that he (only) was convicted so quickly only because he (is) was black.
Ultimately, I do not think that we should introduce capital punishment in Denmark(,) even though some(one) deserve(s) it.

Ja, jeg er meget selvmodsigende, da jeg synes at det er umenneskeligt, men hvis en fra min familie eller en person jeg holdte af blev slået ihjel el. lign. ville tanken om at den person der har gjort det fortjener at blive henrettet. Men hvordan skal jeg så formulere på engelsk, at jeg ikke går ind for det, men jeg synes, at nogen forbrydelser er så slemme, at folk i pricippet/metaforisk set ikke fortjener et liv?? Sådan så det ikke kommer til at lyde så voldsomt.

Hviderusland og rusland og andre lande har stadig dødsstraf. Hviderusland har endda et meget stort forbrug af det....

 Jeg kan ikke hjælpe dig. Du er forvirret, og der er ingen sammenhæng i det du siger.

Dine danske sætninger giver heller ikke mening altid.

Man kan ikke på samme tid sige at man er for noget og imod det. Det er vrøvl.