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My holiday in Scotland
I am in the capital of Scotland now. It is a beautiful city with lovely buildings. I saw the palace of (holy rood) Holirood house and in the Edinburgh castle I saw a fantastic show with military band, bagpipe dances. I was in Scotland’s largest and most exciting animal collection the Edinburgh Zoo, and all my family favorites were there, tiger’s gorillas and giraffes. .
I saw Lock Ness. (it is one of these lochs it is twenty-three miles long and about one mile wide, it is up to 300 meters deep. Lock Ness. It is the ideal hiding place for a prehistoric colony of monsters because it is so deep and dark and I saw the Lock Ness monster, which I hadn't seen it before. It was scary to look at. I and my family met a man who told us  he  would show us the Lauriston Castle the next day.