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Every story starts somewhere, and Donna Jensen’s story begins in a little town Silver Springs. Donnas wish is, that she can get away from Silver Springs. She had a boyfriend Tommy, they have plans together. In Donna’s birthday, Tommy broken up with her, because he also think that Donna is a small town woman. No one believes or trusts her, They all think she is a girl, who can’t do anything alone.

After reading Sally Weston’s book “My life in the sky”, Donnas life begins to change. Sally Weston is the most famous flight attendant in the world. Donna suddenly decides to become flight attendant, although she never has been on a plane. She starts from the beginning. First she becomes stewardess in a little company and with her to colleagues she decides to go to a conversation for become stewardess in a bigger airline with name Royalty. Donna and Christine get the job as flight attendant in express class, and Sherry didn’t, so Donna and Christine begin in stewardess school.
Donnas dream is become a stewardess in first class and moved to Paris, but it is not so easy. She fights for hers dream, and she becomes the most clever student in her class.
There was a entrance examination for became stewardess in first class. Christine admitted to the job as a first class stewardess, but Donna didn’t and she knows that was something wrong with that.
Donna didn’t want to work as express stewardess, and want a new entrance examination, but that it’s impossible. A woman with broken heart, she has to say yes to stay in Cleveland in 1 year and wait for the next exam. In Cleveland he meets a man, and she falls in love with him. They moved together and have plans to married.
Sally Weston helps Donna, and they found out that Christine had change her id number on hers exam papers, with Donnas. Donna get a new chance, and she takes the exam again, and was suitable for the job as first class stewardess, but she had a problem, she has to chose Ted and married with him or moved to Paris and follow her dream to be international first class stewardess.

To beginning Donna Jensen is a small towns woman, she don’t believe herself, and didn’t have goals in her life. But later in the film she became ambitious and strong. I think she had learned much from Sally, and I like that she never give up and forgets her dream. She all time do her best, and nothing stands her to go after her dream, not even her family or boyfriend.

Sally Weston performs a woman, who was a unknown girl from Texas to the world’s most famous flight attendant. She never gives up, and she all time work for became the best. In the film Sally is Donnas student adviser. She is helpful and strict.

He thinks.  Donnas dream is to.  She wants.

Jeg kunne ikke lige finde mere.Det er en flot historie/referat du har skrevet.

Tusind tak for hjælpen :)

Donna's wish (du har lavet den fejl med ejefald flere steder. Det skal du lige rette), Tommy BROKE up with her, because he also thinkS.

du siger "to colleagues", mener du "two colleagues?". Det hedder ikke "hers dream eller hers exam. Det hedder bare "her dream" og "her exam".

Man kan heller ikke sige that it's. Det hedder bare that's impossible.

Der er en del flere grammatiske fejl og sætninger der lyder meget dansk, men da du kun går i 9. klasse så tror jeg, at det er udemærket.

powerfull 499, tusind tak for hjælpen :)

Jeg prøver lige rette det nu. Jeg har altid fået 4 med stor pil op af, så kæmper sådan for at få et lille 7 tal :)

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Prøv lektiehjælp fysisk, tror du måske for mere ud af det på den måde. 

Fik faktisk også 4 (02) i engelsk afleveringer, da jeg så gik til lektiehjælp hævede det mit gennemsnit en del.

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