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Right now I’m living at a boarding school at West of Jutland. The school’s name is “grejsdalen efterskole,” which is my second year at boarding school. At grejsdalen we have a lot of values in the weekdays.

The first one is devotion, which means that one of the teachers is telling something about Christianity. Mostly the teachers tell stories from the bible about Jesus. We have devotion in the morning at eight O’clock and twenty minutes in ten at the evening. We have devotion, because all the students live at a Christianity school, and their family is Christian. If you were a Christian at my old school from the state school, you would be treated like an idiot, because you couldn’t believe at Jesus. So boarding school and devotion means a lot to me, and I know that all from the boarding school come from a Christian home, and have all heard about Jesus. I think it’s nice to hear about Christianity in the weekdays and it’s also an good experience to hear about something new.

The second one is the friendship between teacher and student. At grejsdalen we have a very great friendship between teacher and student, because we are living together and must have a great friendship, before we can have a nice stay at boarding school. You are not only together with the teacher in the school lessons, but also after school, and that means that you can get the teacher to some of the optional subjects. My old class teacher from 7th grade hated me, and we didn’t had a nice friendship, so it means that I like the friendship between teacher and student at boarding school, and it also make me more happy to go in school. You can talk to you teacher about everything, when the school day is done, and you couldn’t do exactly the same in state school because you didn’t have the great friendship like boarding schools.

The third one is friendship between students. Last school year I was also living at an another boarding school named “Hammerum Efterskole.” I got a lot friendship that school year, and I still have the contact with the boys and girls. Before I started at Hammerum I didn’t know anyone, but I learned a lot of people to know very fast in the start of the school year, and suddenly we had a great friendship between students. We treated each other like we have known each other in many years. At Blåkilde we also have a great friendship between students. When I started at Blåkilde I only know some few persons, but suddenly I was talking to a lot of them, and we treat each other like we have known each other for years, without having it. I think that there is a big difference between students in the state schools and boarding schools, because in boarding schools you are living with a boy from the school, and you are always together with all the people from the boarding school, so it means that you know the persons very good, and are always together in the spare time, and you see each other all the days. In state school you are only together in school and not always after, and that means that your friendship not is better than the boarding schools, because at boarding school you are always together.

Some people say that boarding school are for people that don’t have friends and that’s simple why they are leaving the state school, but I don’t think so, because I moved to boarding school because I would learn some new persons to know. I’m very grateful that my persons sent me to boarding school because I have got a lot of better friendship now, so that means that my best friends is from boarding school!
Boarding school is an amazing experience, and that’s the best thing that had happened to me!
 

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