Tysk

Tysk aflevering.

27. januar 2011 af josephiine (Slettet) - Niveau: B-niveau

 Hej alle søde og forhåbentlig behjælpelige mennesker her på studieportalen. 

Jeg har skrevet en tysk stil, men da jeg er rigtig dårlig til tysk, tænkte jeg på om nogle måske havde lyst til lige at læse den igennem og kigge lidt på ordstillingen osv. 

Den handler om kærlighed (den er noget bras for at sige det mildt)

Jeg håber nogen kan hjælpe. 

<span lang="DE" style="font-size: 13.0pt;line-height:150%;mso-ansi-language:DE">Meine name ist Sofia, und ich will erzähle sie Wie erfahre ich mein Glück</o:p>

<span lang="DE" style="font-size: 13.0pt;line-height:150%;mso-ansi-language:DE">Was ist liebe? Es ist ein Gefühl? Oder es ist  Phantasie?</o:p>

so<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">begann ich<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">meinen<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">dänischen<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">Stil, zu der Prüfung im Mai letzen Jahre. Ich habe Gedanken zu das Wort seit. Ich weiß nicht, was ich bin bekommen um.  Ich<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">hatte<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">noch nie verliebt<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">gewesen<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">in dem Moment, So<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">es war<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language: DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">leicht<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">für<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">mich<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">darüber zu spekulieren, was es wirklich<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">bedeutet<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%; color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE">, verliebt zu sein. </o:p>

Jemand<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">sagt, man kann<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">nicht ohne<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">Liebe leben, aber ich hatte getan, bis dann.  Ich<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">verstehe jetzt<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%; color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE">, was sie<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">damit gemeint. Ich<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">verstehe jetzt<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%; color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE">, was die Leute<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">von<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">"<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%; color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE">Gefühl im Bauch"<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">bedeuten. </o:p>

Ich habe den Jungen traf. Er ist mein Fazit über die liebe. Er ist fantastisch, er ist schön, er ist alles gut. Ich<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language: DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">würde<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">nichts ändern<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">über ihn<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%; color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE">,<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">für mich<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">ist er<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">perfekt<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%; color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE">. <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">Er<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language: DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">möglicherweise nicht für<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">andere<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%; color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE">, aber<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">für<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">mich<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">ist er<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">perfekt<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%; color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE">.<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language: DE"> </o:p>

Oder Sie <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">können<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">es<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language: DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">so<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language: DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">sagen<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%; color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE">:<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">Niemand<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">ist<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">perfekt<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%; color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE">, aber einige<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">sind für<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">einander<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">perfekt<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%; color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE">.  Ich weiß <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">nicht,<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">was ich<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">tun werde<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%; color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE">, wenn ich<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">ihn<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">verliere. Ohne<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">Liebe<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">ist<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">nicht<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">möglich<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">für einen<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">Menschen<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">zu leben<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%; color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE">. <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">Alle Menschen<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">sind<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">von<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">jemandem<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">geliebt zu werden.<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">Es ist<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">einfach nicht<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">alle<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">findet<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">diese<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">Person. <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">Ich<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">habe<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">und<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">hatte ich das Glück, denn<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">ich kann<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">mir nicht vorstellen,<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">ein Leben ohne<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">unsere<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">Liebefüreinander<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%; color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE">.</o:p>

<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language: DE">So was ist liebe? Mein Abschluss<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">ist<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">das<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%; color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE">, was man<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">nicht<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height: 150%;color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE"> <span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%;color:black; mso-ansi-language:DE">leben kann<span lang="DE" style="font-size:13.0pt;line-height:150%; color:black;mso-ansi-language:DE">.</o:p>


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Svar #1
27. januar 2011 af supercat2010 (Slettet)

Mein Name ist Sophia und ich möchte euch (wenn du deinen Vornamen benutzt würde ich die Leser nicht siezen) davon erzählen wie ich mein Glück gefunden habe.
Was ist Liebe? Ist es ein Gefühl? (Oder gibt es sie nur in unserer Phantasie?)
So begann ich meinen dänischen Stil (Stil sagt man so nicht auf deutsch, aber ich weiß leider nicht was das heißt) in der Prüfung im Mai letzten Jahres. (Ich weiß nicht welche Note ich bekommen habe?) Ich habe mir seitdem über dieses Wort gedanken gemacht. Ich war bis dahin noch nie verliebt gewesen, deswegen war echt leicht (oder NICHT leicht?) für mich darüber zu spekulieren, was es wirklich bedeutet verliebt zu sein.
Manche Menschen sagen /Jemand hat einmal gesagt, dass man ohne Liebe nicht leben kann, aber ich habe es bis dann getan.Ich verstehe jetzt was sie damit meinen(wenn du "manche Menschen" nimmst)/ was er/sie damit gemeint hat(wenn du "jemand" nimmst). Ich verstehe jetzt, was die Leute mit dem "Gefühl im Bauch" (ich würde "mit den "Schmetterlingen im Bauch"" sagen) meinen.
Ich habe den Jungen getroffen. Er ist mein (Abbild der Liebe?). Er ist fantastisch, er sieht gut aus, alles an ihm ist toll. Ich würde an ihm nichts ändern wollen, für mich ist er perfekt. Vielleicht nicht für andere, aber für mich schon.
Oder man kann es auch so sagen: niemand ist perfekt, aber manche sind für einander perfekt. Ich weiß nicht was ich tun würde, wenn ich ihn jemals verlieren sollte. Ohne Liebe ist es nicht möglich für einen Menschen zu leben. Alle Menschen (wollen/sollten von jemandem geliebt werden?). Es ist nicht einfach jeden dieses jemand zu finden. Ich hatte und habe das Glück und ich kann mir ein Leben ohne unsere Liebe füreinander nicht mehr vorstellen.
Also, was ist Liebe? Meine Antwort ist: das, ohne was man nicht leben kann.

Schöner Text und ich hoffe ihr bleibt noch lange zusammen :D


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