rettelse af en kort tekst :-)

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jeg skulle oversætte en tekst fra dansk til englesk så vil spørge om der er nogen som er stærke i at rette en englesk tekst :-)

på forhånd mange tak!

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Translation of an English text

The results from the various studies of the relationship between inheritance and environment can be influenced by many different sources of error; example will adoptive- investigation and twin-investigation may not yield the same result if the concerned gene is dominant or declining. The environment of identical twins may be more identical than of fraternal, and even with identical twins, which live in the same family, there may be variations in the individual environment. The genetic difference between fraternal twins may also be less than expected if the parents are relatively identical (example there are a tendency to intelligent men which often have children with intelligent women). Besides are there a complication that some qualities are subject hereditary disposition, i.e. that certain genes allow to environment develop the quality. The results you get are not necessarily universal. If you example examine the hereditary of the body height in Denmark, where everyone gets a good nutrition, then you will find a higher degree of heredity conditionality, than if you do it the same in Ethiopia, where some of the people during their childhood which has a bit of famine. The common childhood environment contributes just a little to explaining the variation in these brings up personality traits. On the other hand it is a general explanation of certain relationships which are learned socially, e.g. Social conformity, interest in politics or sports, order sense, economy, self-assured, honesty, morality, feeling of guilt, sociability etc. it’s completely individual environment plays an astounding big role in many conditions. It plays e.g. into in like that conditions as homosexuality and anorexia, and it plays a leading part concerning the persons trust to others, connection to others, and relation to love. This circumstance that many things decide of neither inheritance nor common childhood environment thus leaves the possibility for that free will which can be a reality.