Hjælp til at rette engelsk! :-)

 Hej, er der nogen som har lyst til hurtigt at læse dette igennem og rette hvis der er fejl - hvilket der helt sikkert er. 

Hvis i vil være søde, at rette i hele teksen også sende den tilbage, så jeg kan se hvor jeg har lavet fejl.

Tusind tak på forhånd! :-)

The study examines the society, the family pattern and the individual’s socialization from the postwar period until nowadays and which differences that had come throughout the time ages. In short: is your life story already told or can you tell it by yourself. The paper describes the society development and compare the industry society and nowadays. Based on the three accounts the paper discuss, with a social point of view, which social conditions there has changed by the use of concepts of social studies and sociology. It is shown that the society is a lot different today from the post war time, because of the revolution who questioned the traditionally way to life. The so-ciety development has made us a lot more individualized, globalized and your opportunities, as young today, is improved a lot.

I can conclude that the traditional pattern of family life has changed since the industry society. The family’s is improved and that provide a breeding ground for better and further education. Your opportunity as a child is a lot better today than past time because of the youth rebellion in the 60’s. The youth pushed to the ordinary standards that nobody had questioned before. In the in-dustry society the regular story was “like father like son” but that changed under the influence of the young rebel’s new reflecting way of thinking. Today you can be whatever you want to.
The youth rebellion got a move on, to the society today because of their nontraditional thinking that make people consider their way to life and how far they should keep their traditions. Second-ary socialization has become a big part of the way you raising a child opposite the family's way to do it in the industry society.
The social relations has become different for the reason that you don’t choose your circle of ac-quaintances and partner on the basis of locality or social class but on account of interests and indi-vidual opinion. Because of our growing globalization the risk society has change throughout the ages. Past time your risk was noticeable contrast the risk today. Nowadays you’re aware of the consequence of your choices and because of that you have to be confident in the expert’s advices.