Message in a bottle - hjælp til engelsk stil (FSA)

Hej alle!

Har en engelsk stil for som jeg godt kunne bruge noget hjælp til og tænkte nogle af jer andre måske havde haft den før. Den skal handle om en pige der har skrevet "a message in a bottle" som en anden så finder. Håber i kan hjælpe mig med at få rettet grammatikfejl eller bare komme med andre gode ideer (er løbet helt tør :-)

To the person who finds this bottle:

I am so glad that you have found my message! You are probably the only one that can save me now. I desperately need your help. I am living of fruits, especially the bananas from the trees but it is a little difficult because of the monkeys who certainly don’t want to share with me. There are so many different kinds of new fruits that I have never seen before. There is a source in the woods with clean water and that is what I am drinking right now. I am also trying to catch fish, but it is very hard and sometimes I get a single fish. I am stranded on an island but I have no idea of where it is. Right now I am sitting on a stump of a tree. I think it will start to rain soon so I am going to wright the rest in my lair that I have built for myself.

I am sorry, I almost forgot to introduce myself. My name is Samantha Landon and I am 35 years old. I live back home in Bar Harbor in Maine with my lovely husband, James. Together we have two adorable children, Sara and Luke. My husband is a fisher and studies all kinds of rare fish species.

So the situation is that for a few weeks ago I sailed out on my husband’s ship. Our wedding anniversary was coming up and I wanted to give him a very special gift. Therefore I decided to find a rare fish that he had been studying for weeks and give it to him. I know what you are thinking, it was a very stupid idea and I can see it now. I mean how was I ever supposed to find a rare fish out in the deep blue ocean that even my husband could not find? It does not matter anyways because it is all too late now.

Now I want you to contact the police and make them run an investigation near Bar Harbor, Maine on a little island. Make them call my family also so they know that I am still alive. It is kind of getting lonely out here so please hurry. I have multiple times caught myself in talking to the monkeys and the weird part is that I think they understand me. I really hope that I can make it back home before me and my husband’s wedding anniversary. If you help me home in time I promise that I will never forget you!

Thanks

Samantha Landon