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Hej er der nogen der kan rette denne tekst.
da jeg skal aflevere den imorgen.
på forhånd tak
Children exposed to family violence , experiencing an attack on the basic security. The adults who should protect the child, is suddenly the person the child is afraid . The period following the violence also harms the child, the child waiting in fear that "it" happen again. Children exposed to violence often believe it is their own fault - but it's never the children's fault that they are beaten . It is always the adult choice and responsibility.
Svar #1
14. januar 2015 af exatb
Children exposed to family violence , will experience an attack on their basic security needs. The adults who should protect the child, are suddenly the persons the child is afraid of. The period after the violence also harms the child, the child is waiting in fear that "it" will happen again. Children exposed to violence often believe it is their own fault - but it's never the children's fault that they are beaten . It is always the adults` choice and responsibility.
Svar #2
14. januar 2015 af SantasLittleHelper (Slettet)
En sætning ad gangen.
"Children exposed to family violence , experiencing an attack on the basic security."
Ingen mellemrum før kommaet. Personligt ville jeg slet ikke sætte et komma fordi der er ikke brug for en pause.
Ret "experiencing" til "experience".
Ret "the" til "their" da vi taler om en person, og ikke bare noget generelt.
Ingen ville sige "basic security". Jeg er ikke helt sikker på hvad du mener med det. Selvværd?
"The adults who should protect the child, is suddenly the person the child is afraid ."
Ingen mellemrum før punktummer.
Husk at bruge "are" når substantivet (navneordet) er i flertal. Jeg tror dog, at du mener "adult" i stedet for "adults" så fjern s'et.
Tilføj "of" efter "afraid".
"The period following the violence also harms the child, the child waiting in fear that "it" happen again."
Der er i princippet kun to tekniske fejle. Det er meget gebrokken engelsk, men det er din læres job at rette sådan noget. Fjern gåseøjnene fra "it", sæt "might" før happen.
"Children exposed to violence often believe it is their own fault - but it's never the children's fault that they are beaten ."
Jeg ville fjerne bindestregen og sætte et komma i stedet.
"It is always the adult choice and responsibility."
Sæt "'s" bag på "adult".
Du får nok ikke et 12 tal fordi det lyder virkelig gebrokken når man læser det, selv efter det er rettet, men grammatik fejlene burde være væk hvis mine råd.
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