En lille engelsk historie

Er der nogen der vil rette den her lille historie på engelsk? Det kan være at der er nogle stave fejl, eller nogle stedet hvor jeg ikke har bøjet ordene rigtigt. :-) Den er ikke særlig lang. 

Tony is a 17 year old boy. He has a little brother named Robert and a little sister named Debbie.

Robert is 15 and Debbie is 14. Their dad is a businessman and their mom named Mrs. Dilaurentis is a fashion designer.

Tony, Robert and Debbie have summer vacation now, so they are going to New York today. Their dad can’t go to New York with them, because he is on a business trip in Europe.

Tony is sitting on the plane with his family, the trip last about 6 hours and 30 minutes.

They are now on their way to the hotel called The Broadway At Time Square Hotel, which is close to Time Square. When they arrived at the hotel, they started to unpack. At 6 pm they found a restaurant that they could eat in. When they have eaten, they go back to the hotel and fall asleep.

The next day, they go out for shopping. Debbie is a shopaholic she is running from one store to another store, the boys and their mom can’t keep up with her.

“ Come on Debbie, i’m hungry, let’s go and find a place to eat “ says Robert.

“ Noo, wait. I have to buy this cute shirt “ Says Debbie.

“ Fine, only that shirt and then we’ll find a place to eat! “ Says Robert.

Debbie doesn’t listen to the boys, she is just standing there and looking at the clothes.

“ Hurry Debbie, your brothers are hungry! “ Says mom.

“ Okay, okay! “ Says Debbie, and walk over to the check out.

When she has bought the shirt, they walk out of the store.

“ See! There is a Mcdonalds! “ says Robert

“ Ya, let’s go eat there! “ says Tony.

They walk over to the Mcdonalds and they begin to eat.

At 2 pm they are walking across the Time square. Tony, Robert, Debbie and their mom are walking under a bridge.

“ Hey! Give me your purse! “ someone is shouting.

“ Stop! “ Whispers Mrs. Dilaurentis.  

Everyone stops walking. They can see a man with a gun in front of a old woman.

Tony take his phone and call the police. After 2 minute the police arrived.  

Tony walk over to one of the policemen, while Robert, Debbie and Mrs. Dilaurentis is looking at the man with the gun.

“ Hello sir! The man is over there “ says Tony, and pointing at the man.

“ Right over there? “

“ Yes! “

“ Okay, come on let’s go! “

The policemen walk over to the man, and Tony’s mom and brother and sister are walking over to Tony.

They arrest the man, and takes him into the car.

One of the policeman talks with the old woman, and then they point at tony and his family.

The woman and the policeman walk over to Tony and thanks him a lot.

When the policemen are gone, Tony and his family are walking over to their hotel.

Tony, Debbie and Robert are watching tv.

“ Tony, come here! Your dad wants to talk with you! “ said mom.

Tony walk over to mom, and talk with his dad.

“ Hi dad! “ said Tony.

“ Hi Tony! I just heard that you helped a old women from being robbed! I am so proud of you my son! “

“ Thank you dad! “

They talk further.

At 8 pm Tony is lying on the bed and thinking about what happened today.