engelsk stil om sommerferie

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Family travel
I saw my friends for the last time , cause I’m not going to see my classmates anymore. After the holiday I´m going to another school. Before I left the room, my teacher gave me a postcard;
Dear Rebecca.
You have been a very good classmate. we all have so many mines with you, and we hope you´re going to love your new school, friends, and are going to have a great future

Love from your classmates and teacher who will miss you
I was very grateful for that they had written to me; it was a good start at the holiday.
It was a beautiful day especially because we have summer-holiday, the birds were singing, the sun was shinning, and people were happy. I had waited for this day in many months. My family, and me had decided to, went to Miami in 3 weeks, I think it will be a very good trip.
Just as I came home, we packed our suitcases and drove in direction to the airport. My brother has not been interested for the holiday, but my parents say that he must come. He is seventeen, almost eighteen, and 5 years older than me.
 

Har prøvet at rette lidt, men du har lidt problemer med datid og nutid. :)

oorrh tusind tak for din hjælp! Jeg vil virkelig gerne have en god karakter, så vil høre om du kunne rette også lidt af det nederste? :-)

Resten:

We arrived in the city many hours later. It is very beautiful and warm in Miami. We bought a taxi to drive us to the hotel, where we were staying. The hotel was at a wonderful location; there was a beach, and the view from the rooms was beautiful. We could see across the city and the sea.
Two weeks went on shopping, tanning and spending time at the beach, yet it wasn't enough for me.

Since I had already gotten to know the place, I was allowed to go out and shop in little boutique behind the hotel. I took all my money, because I had spotted the most beautiful thing in the boutique.
I was on my way to the boutique, with a bag in the hand that contained 500 pounds, when all of a sudden: a man pushed me down on the floor, took my bag, and ran away with all my money. I was very depressed and began to cry. We reported him immidiately to the police, but they could not find him.
It was time to go home though. I had experienced something very sad, but besides that, I had the most perfect holiday with the family.

PS: Den første linje er:

I saw my friends for the last time, because I’m not going to see my classmates anymore.

mange tak, hvor er du bare sød:-D

får du da gode karaktere i engelsk eller..? :-)

Skulle vi måske skrive "any more" ???

hvad mener du?

Family travel
I saw my friends for the last time , cause I’m not going to see my classmates anymore. After the holidays I´m going to another school. Before I left the room, my teacher gave me a postcard;
Dear Rebecca.
You have been a very good classmate (en lærer ville ikke kalde en elev for en "classmate"). we all have so many mines with you???, and we hope you(´re going to love) will like your new school, friends????, and are (going to have) in for a great future

Love from your classmates and teacher, who will miss you
I was very grateful for (that) what they had written to me; it was a good (start at) beginning of the holidays.
It was a beautiful day especially because (we have) the summer(-) holidays were about to begin, the birds were singing, the sun was shin(n)ing, and people were happy. I had waited for this day (in) for many months. My family, and (me) I had decided to(, went) go to Miami (in) 3 weeks later, and I think it will be a very good trip.
Just as I came home, we packed our suitcases and drove (in direction) to the airport. My brother has not been (interested for the) keen on holiday making, but my parents say that he must come. He is seventeen, almost eighteen, and 5 years older than me.

#9

Hvordan satte du sådan et billede ind?

I næstsidste linje skal holiday making være  "holidaymaking"

#10,

Jeg trak det fra 'billeder' i 'Dokumenter'  ind på dette felt.

We arrived in the city many hours later. (It is very beautiful and warm in) Miami is very beautiful and warm. We bought???  took a taxi (to drive us)  to the hotel, where we were staying. The hotel was at a wonderful location; there was a beach, and the view from the rooms was beautiful. We could see across the city and the sea.
Two weeks (went) were spent  on shopping,(tanning) basking in the sun and spending time (at) on the beach, yet it wasn't enough for me.

Since I had already got(ten) to know the place, I was allowed to go out and shop in a little boutique behind the hotel. I took all my money(,) because I had spotted the most beautiful thing in the boutique.
I was on my way to the boutique, with a bag in the hand that contained 500 pounds(,) when all of a sudden(:) a man pushed me down on the floor, took my bag, and ran away with all my money. I was very depressed and began to cry. We reported him immidiately to the police, but they could not find him.
It was time to go home though. I had experienced something very sad, but besides that, I had the most perfect holiday with the family.

#8

"Any more" skal skrives i to ord.