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Er der nogen, der har forslag eventuelle rettelser?
Essay about the internet
Was the internet a good invention? We can conclude that the internet makes our lives much easier. If you order a trip to the US, you do it on the internet. Whenever you need information, you do not need to read in a book you just search the internet. The internet is bigger than you can imagine. You can do as much as ordering trips, communicating with other people or check a company´s website. The internet gives us a lot of opportunities. Is that a good thing or not? Well some people claim that their stress have been caused by the internet. I do not know what to believe, but if you use all your being online you might become lonely and friendless. I have met young people on the verge of becoming addicted to computer games. In their cases they wish they never touched these games. As much as the internet can help us as much can it cause us trouble. The Conclusion is that as long you keep a healthy relationship to your computer it won’t cause you trouble.
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Svar #1
21. september 2012 af Stygotius (Slettet)
Essay about the internet
Was the internet a good invention? We can conclude that the internet makes our lives much easier. If you order a trip to the US, you do it on the internet. Whenever you need information, you do not need to read in a book you just search the internet. The internet is bigger than you can imagine. You can (do as much as) even order(ing) trips, communicate(ing) with other people or check a company´s website. The internet gives us a lot of opportunities. Is that a good thing or not? Well, some people claim that their stress (have) has been caused by the internet. I do not know what to believe, but if you (use all your being) go online you might become lonely and friendless. I have met young people on the verge of becoming addicted to computer games. (In their cases t)They wish they never touched these games. As much as the internet can help us (as much can) it can also lead to (cause us) trouble. The (C)conclusion is that as long you keep a healthy relationship to your computer it won’t cause you trouble.
På engelsk skrives Internet med stort I (i modsætning til på dansk).
Svar #3
21. september 2012 af Stygotius (Slettet)
1. Der er ikke noget i vejen med din tegnsætning her. På engelsk er det dog meget mindre almindeligt end på dansk at sætte et komma efter en ledsætning. (se især linje 2)
2. I linje 2 erstat "read in book" med "consult a book".
Svar #4
22. september 2012 af exatb
Man kan ikke erstatte "use all your being" med "go". Man må bruge f.eks. "spend all day", da det er dem der er på hele tiden der bliver friendless. Eller "constantly go".
Svar #5
22. september 2012 af Stygotius (Slettet)
Hnmm, - -du har måske en pointe der. Jeg vil nok foretrække ".......if you spend a great deal of time.." eller "-many hours" eller "a large part of the day..." eller "hours and hours..."
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