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Summary, nogle hurtige rettelser?
12. januar 2006 af
trunte_pigen (Slettet)
Hej med jer.. jeg ville lige høre, om der var nogle, der ville rette de værste fejl i dette summary?
This short story takes place in London. The main character is Sandy and she lives in a flat with her two older sisters. The two sisters, Harriet and Helena are very beautiful while Sandy is not very pretty or attractive. The only thing the Harriet and Helena cares about is their hair, make-up, clothes and to date men. Sandy is an incredibly cook and works for an agency which Mrs. Fairey owns. Sandy kind of runs the flat all by herself, she cooks their food, do the shopping, does the laundry and so on. Sandy does not have a lot of friends and has no experiences with boys. One day she decides to sleep with a man called Danny and Sandy ends up getting pregnant and she will not have an abortion. Then we do not hear anymore about Danny, but Sam Prince appears in the story. Harriet and Helena are both very excited about him and Sandy also finds him very kind. In the end Sandy get Sam Prince, he makes her flat in his house for Sandy and her baby and in return she shall cook for him and he will also publish her cookery book when it is finished. The sisters are left alone and do not know how they can live without Sandy.
This short story takes place in London. The main character is Sandy and she lives in a flat with her two older sisters. The two sisters, Harriet and Helena are very beautiful while Sandy is not very pretty or attractive. The only thing the Harriet and Helena cares about is their hair, make-up, clothes and to date men. Sandy is an incredibly cook and works for an agency which Mrs. Fairey owns. Sandy kind of runs the flat all by herself, she cooks their food, do the shopping, does the laundry and so on. Sandy does not have a lot of friends and has no experiences with boys. One day she decides to sleep with a man called Danny and Sandy ends up getting pregnant and she will not have an abortion. Then we do not hear anymore about Danny, but Sam Prince appears in the story. Harriet and Helena are both very excited about him and Sandy also finds him very kind. In the end Sandy get Sam Prince, he makes her flat in his house for Sandy and her baby and in return she shall cook for him and he will also publish her cookery book when it is finished. The sisters are left alone and do not know how they can live without Sandy.
Svar #1
12. januar 2006 af Romulus (Slettet)
Main character --> protagonist (main character kan også bruges)
older sisters --> elder sisters
incredibly cook --> incredible cook
Sandy kind of runs --> In a way Sandy runs
do the shopping --> does the shopping
and so on --> etc.
decides to sleep with --> goes in bed with
anymore --> anything else
get Sam Prince --> gets Sam Prince
FORSTÅR JEG IKKE: "he makes her flat in his house for Sandy and her baby"
how they can live --> how they are to live
Det var lige det jeg umiddelbart kunne finde, spørg bare hvis du er i tvivl :-)
older sisters --> elder sisters
incredibly cook --> incredible cook
Sandy kind of runs --> In a way Sandy runs
do the shopping --> does the shopping
and so on --> etc.
decides to sleep with --> goes in bed with
anymore --> anything else
get Sam Prince --> gets Sam Prince
FORSTÅR JEG IKKE: "he makes her flat in his house for Sandy and her baby"
how they can live --> how they are to live
Det var lige det jeg umiddelbart kunne finde, spørg bare hvis du er i tvivl :-)
Svar #3
12. januar 2006 af trunte_pige (Slettet)
Hmm der er en lille ting, er du sikker på det er incredible, fordi det sætter den fejl ved?
Svar #4
12. januar 2006 af Romulus (Slettet)
#2
Det var så lidt:-)
#3
Jeg er ret sikker på incredible. Incredible fortæller jo noget om hendes evner som kok (navneord). Et adverbium "lægger" sig jo netop til et verbum/udsagnsord og det er ikke tilfældet her. Jeg tror grunden til at computeren sætter fejl og foreslår cooks, er fordi den opfatter cook som et verbum (tilberede, koge, stege etc.) og derfor skal endelsen -s på, da Sandy jo er 3.person ental.
Et måske bedre og stærkere ladet ord til at beskrive hendes evner kunne være outstanding.
Det var så lidt:-)
#3
Jeg er ret sikker på incredible. Incredible fortæller jo noget om hendes evner som kok (navneord). Et adverbium "lægger" sig jo netop til et verbum/udsagnsord og det er ikke tilfældet her. Jeg tror grunden til at computeren sætter fejl og foreslår cooks, er fordi den opfatter cook som et verbum (tilberede, koge, stege etc.) og derfor skal endelsen -s på, da Sandy jo er 3.person ental.
Et måske bedre og stærkere ladet ord til at beskrive hendes evner kunne være outstanding.
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