rettelse af summary for grove fejl

Nogen der har lyst til at tjekke mit summary igennem for grove fejl og sådan noget der trækker meget ned i karakter.
på forhånd tak :-)

Sara and Timothy are young lovers. They have been together for about two years, and this is the second summer they are spending together at this beach.
At the beach Sara and Timothy are very absorbed in watching a family consisting of a mother, a father and their two children, and especially Sara is observing the family carefully. The children’s ball floats out on the water and their father trying to catch the ball but without any luck. In the meantime Sara realizes the father can’t swim. The children constantly scream at the waters edge, but the father is helpless, there is nothing he can do. Without any hesitation Timothy goes out and helps the father in catching the ball.
To Sara’s disappointment Timothy doesn’t help the children in catching the ball from the water, and she gets even madder when he has a conversation with the family father and she lies at the blanket all by her self. To Timothy’s defence, when he comes back, he says he wouldn’t risk his skin, it is to dangerous to swim out. In the end of the story Sara is leaving the beach without Timothy.