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Er der nogen fejl?
09. november 2006 af
psjetk (Slettet)
hey... nogen der vil se om der er fejl? eller om det overhovedet giver mening?
2. She (the narrator) feels sorry for herself and complains among other things that her friend did not come to visit her at the hospital.
She uses the language in a special way to tell us exactly how she feels. She contradicts all the time. She says something, and does another. For example she says: “(…) well, I wouldn’t bore a friend (…)” (part 1 line 5), but that is exactly what she does. She tells the poor lady that she is not one to complain and we all have our cross to bear, but then suddenly she prattle on how many stitches she got and not to mention the clips, and it was a very serious case, it was fifty-fifty and so on.
And she does not stop here. Her attitude to immigrants finds expression in the way she says that the doctor gave up and went back home. To Kenya. We do not need to know that he went to Kenya, she could had restrict her self to only say that he went back home.
3. I think the narrator if one of those selfish women who does not care about others, and just complain constantly. For example she does not care about her friend, and just thinks she is the one with the biggest problem. She assumes that her friend has been very well, without knowing if she had had any trouble.
I do not think that behaviour is linked to the female sex, but I would say that it is linked to a particular age group. The age group is women of middle age. I think boredom is the actual sinner. I mean if u do not have anything to do, then you will try to find something you can pass the time with. And tell me, is there anything so highly intriguing than to gossip or talk about how hard it is to do nothing.
2. She (the narrator) feels sorry for herself and complains among other things that her friend did not come to visit her at the hospital.
She uses the language in a special way to tell us exactly how she feels. She contradicts all the time. She says something, and does another. For example she says: “(…) well, I wouldn’t bore a friend (…)” (part 1 line 5), but that is exactly what she does. She tells the poor lady that she is not one to complain and we all have our cross to bear, but then suddenly she prattle on how many stitches she got and not to mention the clips, and it was a very serious case, it was fifty-fifty and so on.
And she does not stop here. Her attitude to immigrants finds expression in the way she says that the doctor gave up and went back home. To Kenya. We do not need to know that he went to Kenya, she could had restrict her self to only say that he went back home.
3. I think the narrator if one of those selfish women who does not care about others, and just complain constantly. For example she does not care about her friend, and just thinks she is the one with the biggest problem. She assumes that her friend has been very well, without knowing if she had had any trouble.
I do not think that behaviour is linked to the female sex, but I would say that it is linked to a particular age group. The age group is women of middle age. I think boredom is the actual sinner. I mean if u do not have anything to do, then you will try to find something you can pass the time with. And tell me, is there anything so highly intriguing than to gossip or talk about how hard it is to do nothing.
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11. november 2006 af lulu90 (Slettet)
2. She (the narrator) (the female narrator) feels sorry for herself and complains among (about) other things (fx.) that her friend did not come to visit her at the hospital.
She uses the language in a special way to tell us exactly how she feels. She contradicts all the time. She says something(one thing), and does another. For example (fx.) she says: “(…) well, I wouldn’t bore a friend (…)” (part 1 line 5), but that is exactly what she does. She tells the poor lady that she is not one to complain and we all have our cross to bear, (????? den sætning forstår jeg ikke) but then suddenly she prattle(s) on how many stitches she got and not to mention the clips, and (that) it was a very serious case, it was fifty-fifty and so on.
And she does not stop here. Her attitude to immigrants finds expression (is expressed) in the way she says that the doctor gave up and went back home to Kenya. We do not need to know that he went to Kenya, she could had restrict(could have restricted)her self to only say (herself only to say)that he went back home.
3. I think the narrator if(IS) one of those selfish women who does not care about others (other people)(du kunne skrive hasn't got empathy, and just complain(s) constantly. For example she does not care about her friend, and just thinks she is the one with the biggest problem. She assumes that her friend has been very well, without knowing if she had (Has been through any troubles)had any trouble.
I do not think that behaviour is linked to the female sex, but I would say that it is linked to a particular age group. The age group is women of middle age. I think boredom is the actual sinner. I mean if u (you) do not have anything to do, then you will try to find something you can pass the time with. And tell me, is there anything so highly intriguing than to gossip or talk (than gossip or taking) about how hard it is to do nothing.
SÅDAN! det er mit forslag til hvordan den skal se ud.. jeg har skrevet rettelserne i paranteser() så kan du ses tjekke dem efter..
She uses the language in a special way to tell us exactly how she feels. She contradicts all the time. She says something(one thing), and does another. For example (fx.) she says: “(…) well, I wouldn’t bore a friend (…)” (part 1 line 5), but that is exactly what she does. She tells the poor lady that she is not one to complain and we all have our cross to bear, (????? den sætning forstår jeg ikke) but then suddenly she prattle(s) on how many stitches she got and not to mention the clips, and (that) it was a very serious case, it was fifty-fifty and so on.
And she does not stop here. Her attitude to immigrants finds expression (is expressed) in the way she says that the doctor gave up and went back home to Kenya. We do not need to know that he went to Kenya, she could had restrict(could have restricted)her self to only say (herself only to say)that he went back home.
3. I think the narrator if(IS) one of those selfish women who does not care about others (other people)(du kunne skrive hasn't got empathy, and just complain(s) constantly. For example she does not care about her friend, and just thinks she is the one with the biggest problem. She assumes that her friend has been very well, without knowing if she had (Has been through any troubles)had any trouble.
I do not think that behaviour is linked to the female sex, but I would say that it is linked to a particular age group. The age group is women of middle age. I think boredom is the actual sinner. I mean if u (you) do not have anything to do, then you will try to find something you can pass the time with. And tell me, is there anything so highly intriguing than to gossip or talk (than gossip or taking) about how hard it is to do nothing.
SÅDAN! det er mit forslag til hvordan den skal se ud.. jeg har skrevet rettelserne i paranteser() så kan du ses tjekke dem efter..
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